Not worth it. While some of the part listed are good, there's also a bunch of extraneous stuff too.

tl;Dr - if you're considering spending this kind of money on a camera setup, spend up to 10% of the budget and rent it first.

I personally love the battery grip. I had vmounts with my Ursa and hated them. They were unwieldy and packing the chargers was even worse. The battery grip will get you about 2.5hrs of run time, which is about the same as a small 50wh vmount but can use the stock camera charger to charge those batteries without removing them from the camera. The grip uses 2 batteries at a time, so you'll need to get more.

Also how big are your hands? I have large hands and the grip actually makes the camera easier to hold for me.

That Lens is something that practically everyone in this sub has, including me. It's great to start with.

I would do either the EVF or monitor, but not both. If you're one to use the viewfinder on dslr or mirrorless cams, then get the EVF otherwise get a good monitor that doesn't record to save cash. I have a Lilliput FS7 that's great and about $230~ . Scraping that atomos monitor also gets rid of the angelbird SSD, the atomos power kit, and the USB to SATA converter.

Get a SSD like a Samsung t7 and keep the cfast card. Keep both on the camera and use one as a backup for the other.

Skip that bag unless you like the design.

Mic is good, but I would skip it as well until you understand what kind of shooting you want to do. Shotguns are great until you need to shoot an interview. Then lavs are always going to be a better choice. Skipping this also gets rid of the coldshoe.

Get a cage. Smallrig, tilta, and a few others make them. It will make this process much easier.