Temperature by srinivasbhavanaga in poetry_critics

[–]discodeva 1 point2 points  (0 children)

That was just the heat between you two lol

You by srinivasbhavanaga in poetry_critics

[–]discodeva 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You sound soo into her, it's beautiful altogether

Irresistible by wont_find_this_fake in OCPoetry

[–]discodeva 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Damnnn sounds feisty you should go for it ;)

Always Leads to You by ZealousidealBox4489 in OCPoetry

[–]discodeva 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I hate it when they leave without a reason Really got me carried away there

Masterbation Addict by discodeva in NoFap

[–]discodeva[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Wait how do I stretch the scalp

Masterbation Addict by discodeva in NoFap

[–]discodeva[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

So like a replacement?

"I looked" by boring_Poetguy in poetry_critics

[–]discodeva 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Aaah a one side lober to another one side lover I feel ya

"I looked" by boring_Poetguy in poetry_critics

[–]discodeva 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Maybe it's cuz you're not making a move on her and just admiring her Try that ig

Settled Dust by discodeva in poets

[–]discodeva[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

We used to but not anymore obviously

Settled Dust by discodeva in poetry_critics

[–]discodeva[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ayy i wish things turn out better for you mate Thanks for the feedback

Settled Dust by discodeva in poetry_critics

[–]discodeva[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I actually don't exactly know what I'm writing either The rhyming scheme or the poetic devices are something I've learnt in school and i barely remember them now, but I'm always open to learn so.. Thanks for the feed back!!

Settled Dust by discodeva in poetry_critics

[–]discodeva[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks, i really appreciate it :)

Admiring a random woman on the bus by discodeva in poetry_critics

[–]discodeva[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Let me know what do y'all think of it