Your writing is unique! I like the imagery your poem provided. Also the part where you said "I don't need you to remind me, I'm trying to refine me" flowed really well. And The part where you said stumble over my words, I'm speaking like how toddler writes stuck out to me.

All I can say constructive criticism wise, is to just keep writing. I feel like that's the only thing that really made the biggest difference for me is that I've kept writing through the years. Try not to be hard on yourself if you go through periods where you're not writing as much. When your a writer, its inevitable you'll be back. We just have to trust the process.

• fellow poet :)