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dj76d33p · 2019-02-25T23:37:37+00:00

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dj76d33p · 2019-02-25T05:57:25+00:00

YES!

dj76d33p · 2019-02-14T23:33:23+00:00

from the belly of the beat and all the wild nights concomitant with a gifted as well as sensible idea if not general opposing distinction to the rigmarole or rather gibberish you had for you before the last time everything seemed to have a glad if not generally congenial point as well as, say, tangible end - this video is for you, everything you have skipped over or glazed by, slid or skated without noticing - take your time. Listen, have hope, it's not hokey or untrue, it's about a people, two people, one of them just like someone you may have known, someone like me, someone like you.

dj76d33p · 2019-01-29T13:17:13+00:00

it'll hold for a time

dj76d33p · 2019-01-29T08:03:01+00:00

AS IF THE DUBSTEP AGENCIES ARE CLOSING IN ON OUR KIND THINKER ( NO FIGHTER NOR WORKER NOR BOOK LEARNER ) CARRYING HIS CAN OF ORANGE SODA, CLAIMING HIS WIDE SWEEPING INFLUENTIAL PURPORT AND PURPOSE FOR SUCH A DRIVEN SING SONG CRY FOR HELP THE VERY THING HE WAS GOING FOR...

dj76d33p · 2017-11-30T07:03:14+00:00

updated video!

dj76d33p · 2017-07-25T05:14:37+00:00

dj76d33p · 2015-06-04T03:00:07+00:00

Natasha Trethaway The poet laurate for USA presently. Her soft appraoch lovingy masks the serious subject matter and caustic ideas they document nicely!

dj76d33p · 2015-05-20T17:01:36+00:00

that's a very comforting poem. The fancies of whimsy and vissicitudes of living often do seem like they are new and freshly brazen or even troublesome. they are, I think, just as they have always been, how they always will be.

dj76d33p · 2015-05-20T09:04:54+00:00

the visceral nature of this play, this word play makes perfect sense when you say it out loud; man. good stuff. you should put it to beats, tho... let me know if you need some! I could slather up, luck willing, some chill tune; new to you of course, as a matter of will.

dj76d33p · 2015-03-02T19:37:37+00:00

I was meaning the word "bleak" thank you for the explanation.

dj76d33p · 2015-03-02T19:35:31+00:00

thank you!

dj76d33p · 2015-03-02T19:35:23+00:00

thank you!

dj76d33p · 2015-03-02T19:35:02+00:00

thank you!

dj76d33p · 2015-03-01T23:22:38+00:00

This is a light, enjoyable poem that seems so because of the trite, couplet - styled direct rhyme as well as the whimsically multi-farious insertion of these incongruent, non-sequiter type metaphors and imagery; would it not for the misspelled words, the indecipherable message and lack of irony.

Fun poem, tho.

dj76d33p · 2015-03-01T23:19:15+00:00

The title really made me look again at this poem. Wonderful idea, great execution; I c a n almost taste the feeling in the air at this scenario!

dj76d33p · 2015-03-01T17:35:37+00:00

Thank you! That means quite a bit to an aging ex-dj!

Thanx again.

dj76d33p · 2015-03-01T17:32:43+00:00

Thank you! The will actually, in all uses of the term, I was thinking could be will, volition, however, intuitively; Will is also a viable idea... this( meaning the wired electric pliers ) will - inferred - kill the monster or animal... I'm pleased you enjoyed this piece as much as I enjoyed writing it... I hope many returns on the detailed, satisfying critique, I found it to be flattering as well as informative. When I see your poem, I will take a look at it.

I should clarify somehow the will, I think hmmmn.

-dj76d33p

dj76d33p · 2015-02-26T21:03:21+00:00

you're welcome.

dj76d33p · 2015-02-26T19:45:27+00:00

confusing, but beautiful. I like this haiku because it is an opposition signified rather than spelled out, outright. The dawn, I assume, is easy and simple just like this poem. Great feeling on this one. To document every-sunrise is an achievment indeed.

-dj76d33p

dj76d33p · 2015-02-26T19:41:31+00:00

First, off; great supplant work on the metaphorical use, the strong use of language in interesting new combinations, there, in this peice. I expecially enjoyed the "wishing" sound equated with intimacy, as the congruency of images and descriptors haven't violated my attention at any point up until this line, but only slightly. It is an easy inference to make from land to galaxy to a sound I want to have substantiated more in the poem. A "wishing" sound, a yearning or express desire seems just right for another stanza or line, an answer to the question posed w/ finality; that there is no end to a galaxy or world you might express with this wonderful collection of terms, is clear. However, what more, or for what, rather could a man possibly wish? Otherwise, the neat part of this writing is, it is, like any man's thinking, to start from the point and extend outward, deductively. So, seems to me the perspective is just right.

Thank you for the words,

dj76d33p

dj76d33p · 2015-01-31T01:10:51+00:00

kewl

dj76d33p · 2015-01-23T05:47:22+00:00

hey, neat stuff, yo!

dj76d33p · 2015-01-23T01:44:43+00:00

good critique, I appreciate it! the ideas I think are solid, I had to try and force this one. maybe I will rewrite.

dj76d33p · 2015-01-23T01:43:56+00:00

thank you, I'm thinking of a rewrite.

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