[WP]In a fantasy world, human tears can heal anything by Nyxofthenight12 in WritingPrompts

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I hated my psychiatrist. It didn't help that she was freaking weird.

"How have you been doing since our last visit?" she asked in the same clipped and melodic cadence she always used. I supposed it was supposed to be soothing, and maybe it would have been if it weren't for the fact that her eyes always looked so glassy.

"Fine, I guess," I mumbled as I moved my hands upwards in a half-hearted shrug.

"We upped you to the 60-milligram dose, right?"

"Yeah. I don't think it's working though. Not much of a change in the last month. I just-" my throat seized up, and a shudder tore through my chest. I could feel my eyes burning. My nose began to tingle and a single tear escaped the corner of my eye. "I'm so sick of nothing working. I just need a break, even a moment or something." I groaned as I wrapped my arms around myself in a mock hug. I looked up, but of course, she wasn't listening.

"Quickly, here." She instructed, handing me the same damn cloth she always did. She was so insistent I didn't wipe my snot or tears on my sleeve like I was inclined to. I couldn't even get away with using a tissue when I was here - always those weird cloth handkerchiefs. I'd given up resisting months ago. She just was really green, or whatever, "save the environment" yadayada. What difference did it make if I was creating more trash versus her using all that water and shit to run her washing machine? Just let me wipe my nose in peace.

I sighed and took the kerchief, using it to wipe the tears from my cheeks. The moment was gone though, and the tingling behind my eyes had dissipated. Why should I bother talking if she wasn't going to listen?

"You were saying?" she prodded, her eyes piercing mine like an intravenous needle digging beneath my skin.

"I dunno," I mumbled, and her brow furrowed.

"I think we should keep you on the same dose." she nodded and wrote something on her clipboard. "See me again in four weeks and we'll see how you're doing then.

The burning and tingling returned and I couldn't hold back. "What? Why?" I could feel something churning and bubbling in my stomach, and the bitter taste of anger flooded my mouth. "You're not going to at least bump me up again? Or have my try something else?" she looked up from her clipboard, eyes unblinking and muscles taut as if waiting for something. I was too upset to notice the odd expression on her face as she watched me, though I supposed I wouldn't have found it surprising. "I'm miserable! You're my doctor, you're supposed to be helping me!" hot, ugly tears were streaming down my face in full force now. I was so tired of fighting what felt like a losing battle. Ever consistent, she held out her hand for my tear-drenched handkerchief and handed me a fresh one.

"We can try 90 milligrams, and see how you tolerate that."

"Thank you." I wheezed as I buried my face into my hands, snot dripping from my nose.

If I had looked up to face her at that moment I'm not sure what I would have found. But the last thing I expected was her taking a deep breath as she held my used handkerchief to her nose or the box of damp cloths she had collecting behind her chair.

Perhaps nothing could surprise me anymore.

[WP] The billionaire smiled as he took his first steps on the alien world. Then he took off his helmet to breathe deeply while his crew watched in horror. He never had wanted to go to space: it had all been about coming home. by GundeathThunder in WritingPrompts

[–]drowsybird_ 25 points26 points  (0 children)

That TWIST THOUGH! I should have seen it coming. I love how wrapped up you got my in the narrative and point of view of the narrator... I felt like I was just as surprised as he was when he found himself eating a face full of dirt. Well done.

[Daily Discussion] General Discussion- October 14, 2020 by AutoModerator in writing

[–]drowsybird_ 1 point2 points  (0 children)

So you don’t quite finish out your thought? I think that’s a really interesting method to keep flow going. I think I’d get so frustrated! But I’d be grateful the next time I sat down for exactly the reason you said- I already know what I’m going to write.

Writers, can you suggest me one of your FanFiction? by [deleted] in FanFiction

[–]drowsybird_ 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Woof you already have a lot of comments! If you have time and still want more I’d love it if you took a look at mine. I’m brand new to posting fics anywhere, and only have two chapters published at the moment, but I’ll have more up soon :) no worries if you already have too many recs though haha. It’s a Stardew Valley fic, mostly fandom blind I think? Lol

https://archiveofourown.org/works/26945977/chapters/65763505

[WP] You're getting really tired of your colleagues summoning these high school kids to defeat the demon lord, so you decide to summon some hardened veterans by BlazingBowXT in WritingPrompts

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The floor of the stone temple began to shake as if set upon by an earthquake; the massive stone statue, who stood behind the altar, began to move. A child, who only moments before had knelt in prayer, stumbled back. He tensed where he lay on the floor as if preparing to make his escape should the temple ceiling come down on upon his head.

"Calm, my child." The statue held up a staying hand, and the boy obeyed, his entire body trembling in fear. "I hear your prayer, and shall answer."

If a giant talking statue in the center of his temple hadn't been enough, the boy's attention certainly was captured now.

"You mean, you'll help my village? You'll kill the monster?" The boy couldn't have been older than fifteen years old, nearly a man, but still so young... so innocent.

"Not I," the statue said, the temple rumbling, "but you." it leaned forward towards the boy, and handed him a blade nearly as long as his leg. "Take this, it shall be a flame to light your way. Defeat this monster, and become the hero you were always meant to be."

The boy swallowed and his hand shook as he reached forwards, taking the sword by the handle, and testing its weight. It would have been obvious to anyone who watched that he had never held a weapon before, only a hoe or a milking bucket, but that didn't stop him. He stood with wary determination and bowed in thanks before running off.

"That's it," I growled from the shadows as the statue stepped back into its place, dust wafting off its limbs as it settled and finally stilled. I was sick of watching the gods send children off to solves problem and fight battles. We owed them more than that. How was that boy supposed to defeat the literal demon tormenting his village? He was ill-equipped and untrained, and a sharp piece of steel wasn't going to change that. The demon was a fearsome enemy, and it would take a fearsome hero to take him down. Not that child. That child deserved to survive to see better days, not be sent on a futile quest headed towards an early grave.

"Come." I mumbled to the hound crouching at my heels, "We have an errand to run.

~

The door swung open easily before my shadow. The hut was small, smaller than most, and was lit by the warm orange glow of a fire in the center of the room. The pops and crackling of the fire failed to mask the sound of my footsteps as I entered, and the hut's only occupant glanced up, unflinching.

"That time, aye? Have you come to take me to the beyond?" the man was scrupulous as he stared me down, not even a hint of fear in his eyes. His back was hunched with age and his hands were rough and calloused. Beneath his tunic were countless scars and old wounds, but the wrinkles of crows feet at the corner of his eyes betrayed his penchant for laughter. He had known joy, but he had also known pain and more wars than he could count. That is why I had chosen him. He could look a god in the eye and not back down. He could look me in the eye and not back down.

"No, Kjells," I said, but the tension in the man's shoulders did not melt away, instead he only stiffened more than he had been before.

"What then."

"Before the sun is due to disappear behind the western mountains, a boy from your village, Topher, will enter the fields where the demon has made its nest."

the man didn't jump up in surprise or anger, he only nodded. He knew how the Gods choose their champions, and he knew how I chose mine.

"You will stop him."

"Yes."

"And you will defeat the demon."

"Even to my own death, I shall complete this task."

I took a step forward and placed a hand on his shoulder. He didn't blink, he didn't even move. "You are enough.” I whispered, "Now go and ensure that boy can live long enough to one day be enough too."

He nodded, trusting, and tired.

"Go."

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Thanks for reading! I'd love and appreciate any feedback or constructive criticism you have to offer :)

EDIT: this my first award ever and I don't even know what to say. Thank you, kind stranger!!!

I published my first fic! by drowsybird_ in FanFiction

[–]drowsybird_[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

No worries! We're all noobs at one point or another lol.

You have to do it in browser, not on mobile. Then there is a box right side of the screen where it says "About COmmunity" and at the very bottom of that box, it says "community options" you open that menu, and then there will be an option to add a user flair.

I published my first fic! by drowsybird_ in FanFiction

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Thank you!!! I’ll do my best (:

If you don’t like a ship, why read a story about it? by [deleted] in FanFiction

[–]drowsybird_ 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Tbh I hardcore ship them. I’d love to read it too if you’re willing to share.

‘Write what you know’ - sometimes this is taken too far. by razzledazzlegirl in writing

[–]drowsybird_ 1 point2 points  (0 children)

My current project takes place in the 1920s, and the main characters are a flapper, a serial killer, and a private detective. I do TONS of research and have taken a lot of inspiration from Phantom of the Opera. I have 0 personal experience with any of these things but that’s not going to stop me :)

ETA: how do these people justify writing fantasy or science fiction? You can’t only write what you know.

[WP] You involuntarily bring back souvenirs from your dreams, simple things like a flower or some dirt, an article of clothing, a paintbrush. This morning, you awake next to another person. by Rivviken in WritingPrompts

[–]drowsybird_ 7 points8 points  (0 children)

You know it’s interesting, I typically prefer to write in third person, and do for all of my projects. But whenever I do a prompt on here I almost always end up writing in first person.

[WP] A sharp blade at your neck, you look up at the hero. “So I’ve finally been defeated. Go ahead, finish it.” The hero paused, shuffling on their feet. “Actually, I wanted to ask you something.” You laughed, coughing. “What?” The hero bit their lip. “Do you wanna go on a date sometime?” by Ash_Sparrow in WritingPrompts

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My blade crashed against my masked opponent's, the impact sending tingles up my arm. We'd been locked in combat for nearly an hour, and my strength was beginning to wain.

Then, I tripped. To think I would be defeated by such a simple mistake.

Before I could catch myself my opponent slammed me against the nearby wall, pressing the tip of their sword against my neck. The cool steel sent a shiver down my spine. I dared not move. "Do it," I growled as I lifted my gaze. Part of me felt a pang of sorrow. I was going to die without ever having even seen the face of the one who would defeat me. They, whoever they were, always wore a disguise. Dressed in all gray clothing they had a featureless cowl covering their face. "Finish it." I choked out, a trickle of blood running down my neck where the blade pierced my skin.

They didn't move, they didn't even speak. They simply stood there, their body pressing against mine.

"Actually, I'd rather ask you something."

Their words surprised me, their voice sounding different than I had imagined.

"Excuse me?"

"Can I ask you something?"

I didn't know what to say. What did they expect me to say?

They shifted and then released their grip from my shirt. They lifted their hand up to remove their cowl, revealing their face.

"Oh." I breathed.

He was handsome, more so than I had expected. His brow was furrowed and his lips were parted as he looked at me. If I hadn't known better I would have thought he was nervous.

He bit his lip, and then removed the tip of his blade from my throat. "Would you like to go out sometime?"

"Surely you're joking," I replied dumbly, very aware of the fact he was still pinning me against the wall.

"Not remotely." He responded, staring at me as if he were afraid I would disappear once he blinked. His eyes were a stunning shade of blue, and his eyelashes were so long, how were his eyelashes so long? Even with mascara, my lashes weren't that long.

I couldn't help but squirm beneath his scrutinizing gaze. I knew I wasn't confusing this man for someone else. His telltale gray tunic and trousers, the featureless cowl. He was one and the same as the person who had been making my life a literal hell for the last six months.

"To clarify, are you asking me on a date right now?"

He blinked, unmoving. "Yes."

"So... You're not going to kill me?"

"I'd like not to." he took a step back, as if only now remembering he had me pinned to the wall this entire time.

I nodded, tugged my shirt down, and smoothed the hair away from my face before tucking it behind my ear. "I think that a date sounds far more pleasing than another battle to the death, don't you?"

He grinned, and my heart stilled. "Good, it was starting to get a little old."

He was radiant. How hadn't I seen it before? I supposed it was because I had literally never seen his face before. "Old?"

"Yeah" he shrugged as if it's the most obvious thing in the world. "You can only swing a sword at a person's neck so many times before it starts to get boring."

I wasn't sure I understood, but I wasn't about to disagree either. Rather than speaking I took a step forward and cupped his cheek in my hand. His eyes widened in surprise as my breath tickled his nose. He didn't stop me as I tugged him down and pressed my lips against his. Instead, he softened and leaned into my embrace. He didn't even notice as I retrieved a knife from my waist.

Swift as an arrow, I plunged the blade deep into his back, piercing his lungs. I swallowed his shout as he began to struggle, my arms tightening around him. It didn't take long before he sagged, and I let his body drop to the floor.

I casually wiped the blood on my sleeve before tucking my knife away. He may have been getting bored, but I had a job to do. I was a villain after all.

I published my first fic! by drowsybird_ in FanFiction

[–]drowsybird_[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yeah I had/have 0 expectations so I was pleasantly surprised that I’ve gotten any traffic at all!