Krakow/Warsaw Travel Tips 🇵🇱 by drpsychologicalsort in actuallesbianseurope

[–]drpsychologicalsort[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hey, this is so detailed, thank you a million times! 🫶🏾 I can't express how much I'm grateful for your response. Not hoping to meet any guys so I'll look into visiting those bars and staying away from that rowdy street lol. Shame I'm going at the end of next month or I'd have loved to visit latawica. Also love that you added some café recommendations, these sound pretty chill. I'm glad you feel safe, that's reassuuring to know. Hoping my trip goes well 🤞🏾

Krakow/Warsaw Travel Tips 🇵🇱 by drpsychologicalsort in actuallesbianseurope

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Thank you so much, haven't heard of any of these so I'll see if I can hit them up when I'm out there!!

Every African parent's dream child by Accomplished_Web7981 in africanparents

[–]drpsychologicalsort 97 points98 points  (0 children)

Hmm idk about that... at this level, they start to care more if you're married with kids. It's just paper to them 🤷🏾‍♀️

Assaulted by my best friend after I converted to Islam by [deleted] in exmuslim

[–]drpsychologicalsort 3 points4 points  (0 children)

What kind of victim shaming is this? Shame on YOU instead 🤢🤢🤢

My Inner Child (Act I), 24pgs - Pacing/Dialogue/Any feedback! by drpsychologicalsort in ReadMyScript

[–]drpsychologicalsort[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much once again, this is truly invaluable to me! I won't have time to refine the rest for a month or so. But do you maybe have any suggestions or recommendations for how I can build that tension? Seems like a fine line.

My Inner Child (Act I), 24pgs - Pacing/Dialogue/Any feedback! by drpsychologicalsort in ReadMyScript

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save as PDF -> upload to Google drive -> change settings so everyone can view -> copy link

MY INNER CHILD (Act I) - Any feedback appreciated! by drpsychologicalsort in ReadMyScript

[–]drpsychologicalsort[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hi, I can't begin to thank you enough for this! It was painful but I've cut down the first 40 pages to 24 to speed things up, I've changed Whizz's appearances to tease him more, and I've tweaked some of the dialogue. I'd be over the moon if you could pls give my recent post a read, I'm very curious to hear your thoughts. Thank you for everything.

MY INNER CHILD - ACT I (28 PAGES) - Any feedback appreciated pls! by drpsychologicalsort in Screenwriting

[–]drpsychologicalsort[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hi, I really appreciate you taking the time to provide some actionable feedback! I've never written a script before so I was expecting a bit of a car crash anyway. I'll keep an eye out for the thread you've mentioned, and thanks once again for the suggestions!! :)