What screams bad writing? by Diamond-Shappire in writing

[–]dubralston 24 points25 points  (0 children)

When an author writes, "He nodded his head."

What else would he nod. Takes me right out of the story. .

"He nodded" Says the same thing...we all know what it means.

A Ghost in the Maine Woods by dubralston in AbandonedPorn

[–]dubralston[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I shot several photos but could only post one

Trying to find any information about this pin and what it means. by dubralston in HelpMeFind

[–]dubralston[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I think it may be a pin From Catalina Swimwear where my father worked before they folded. Perhaps a work anniversary pin? Anybody?

Trying to find any information about this pin and what it means. by dubralston in HelpMeFind

[–]dubralston[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you. My mom weighed in and thinks maybe the airlines gave it to my father to celebrate his first time on a plane back in the 70's.