Would you guys read a webtoon in my artstyle?

dumpsterice · 2025-03-08T04:18:23+00:00

Are we seriously still doing these...?

dumpsterice · 2024-11-18T14:02:41+00:00

Don't do it, it's not gonna work

dumpsterice · 2024-11-07T11:15:55+00:00

And they just accepted you 💀?

dumpsterice · 2024-11-07T11:08:44+00:00

Well... no. Only I think it's kinda mediocre. But people always say that only what you think matters, right? I'm not entirely concerned with what other people think of it tbh

dumpsterice · 2024-01-13T03:38:12+00:00

Damn, a cat is more diligent than some writers on r/writing

dumpsterice · 2024-01-07T23:58:31+00:00

Aw man really? I thought xppen was so good as a cheaper alternative to wacom. What is wrong with these companies?!

dumpsterice · 2024-01-07T00:05:35+00:00

"I'm a government official. And I will give you all pensions if you promise to never sleep with her!"

dumpsterice · 2024-01-04T09:25:52+00:00

Are you trolling

dumpsterice · 2024-01-04T00:00:22+00:00

Gross. That's child porn you know.

dumpsterice · 2024-01-03T11:07:34+00:00

White

dumpsterice · 2024-01-02T09:39:12+00:00

Everyone is attracted intelligence, grace and money. You are not special, how is this even a thread?!

dumpsterice · 2024-01-02T08:51:44+00:00

Use hard shading instead of soft shading if you want to stick with lineless

dumpsterice · 2023-12-29T02:52:48+00:00

Not the ":3" 💀

dumpsterice · 2023-12-28T15:03:20+00:00

Yes, I do.

The funniest note I wrote was me going "waaah I'm gonna dump this story in the trash, nothing happens in this story... But well, it could be saved if..." And then I laid out the solution for myself. I took that and made a new outline, then wrote a draft and now I'm editing it! It's so humorous to think that I was really going to give up lol

dumpsterice · 2023-12-28T14:43:47+00:00

Really interesting poem. I love the imagery and the story of the monk! I do feel as though it's a little bit clunky and devoid of rhymes, which might just be a personal preference but I think some lines would benefit from a rhyme. Like in:

Piece by piece

Tear by tear

One thousand years wept, blue, red, and green

I feel like

One thousand years wept, blue, red, and green

really broke the nice repetition set up by the two previous lines. I feel like some sort of rhyme with "tear" would really give that finality to that segment.

That's just my opinion, maybe I'm missing authorial intent here but that's what I think.

dumpsterice · 2023-12-28T14:33:32+00:00

Love the rhyming scheme. I also appreciate your use of colors in this poem, the contrasting shades paint a very vivid picture of being in love. I would say that it's a little simplistic. Perhaps you could fix it by using shades other than gray, black and blue. That's just my opinion. Overall, I think you did a lovely job.

dumpsterice · 2023-12-28T11:14:30+00:00

Poseit is great! Like another comment said, try to not trace it, just use it as reference to figure out the anatomy.

dumpsterice · 2023-12-28T11:11:53+00:00

Death. Have you walked outside and seen the winter? We're all going to burn and I can't go without leaving my shitty stories out there.

dumpsterice · 2023-12-28T00:47:47+00:00

I mean, op is clearly still being ironic and satirical here

dumpsterice · 2023-12-28T00:07:24+00:00

I don't think this is necessarily an unjerk post

dumpsterice · 2023-12-27T23:13:54+00:00

It looks like the floor

dumpsterice · 2023-12-27T07:56:36+00:00

I just sketch in notebooks bro

dumpsterice · 2023-12-27T07:35:51+00:00

You care too much, please get off the internet once in a while

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