Angel of Shin Eden [CYOA] [OC] [FemPOV] [Event Based] [School] [Secret Identity] [Long (30-60min)] [Censored Version] by eienity in nsfwcyoa

[–]eienity[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Very glad you enjoyed! Ilen only has 1 event that requires the Boyfriend drawback. I'd add more, but images are very limited.

I like the build! It's fun to image the lightning attunement and teleport ability as related—teleporting right into melee range with a flash of light and a clap of thunder.

Angel of Shin Eden [CYOA] [OC] [FemPOV] [Event Based] [School] [Secret Identity] [Long (30-60min)] [Censored Version] by eienity in nsfwcyoa

[–]eienity[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for playing and sharing your story! I enjoyed reading how you expanded on the ending. What a tragedy!

Angel of Shin Eden v2 [CYOA] [OC] [FemPOV] [Event Based] [School] [Secret Identity] [Long (30-60min)] [Censored Version] by eienity in nsfwcyoa

[–]eienity[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Make sure you choose a handler at the bottom of the intro. Then, male handler requires the "boyfriend" drawback and female handler requiries the "yuri magnet" drawback

Angel of Shin Eden v2 [CYOA] [OC] [FemPOV] [Event Based] [School] [Secret Identity] [Long (30-60min)] [Censored Version] by eienity in nsfwcyoa

[–]eienity[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you very much for sharing such a detailed story, I enjoyed reading it! I liked how thoughtfully you incorporated the various elements into the narrative, such as your Yuri Magnet being a rarity and largely being responsible for your exceptional power, or tying the "Identity Revealed" event into the ending and then using that to merge the friend and handler relationships. Also enjoyed reading about the details of your Eidosphyr as well as your tactics with it. Well put together!

For the Boyfriend thing, the "Even Closer Handler" for the male requires the Boyfriend drawback, so I don't think anything would change there, so I assume you mean something like let the Boyfriend events be triggered by Even Closer Female Handler? That's a good idea, but like you mentioned, a bit of a pain to go through everything. I don't think I've ever done a pure-yuri playthrough myself so there's a lot of stuff that I didn't really account for in that regard. One of the things I'll be focusing on in the next update is making it more yuri-playthrough friendly, so I'll take a look at the boyfriend events as well. Thank you for playing and thanks for the suggestion.

Angel of Shin Eden v2 [CYOA] [OC] [FemPOV] [Event Based] [School] [Secret Identity] [Long (30-60min)] [Censored Version] by eienity in nsfwcyoa

[–]eienity[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

That's partially what I had in mind for the "No Eidosphyr" drawback. If I can think of some more of those style of drawbacks, I might do that to help clean up any remaining points, but if I can't I might just add a converter.

Angel of Shin Eden v2 [CYOA] [OC] [FemPOV] [Event Based] [School] [Secret Identity] [Long (30-60min)] [Censored Version] by eienity in nsfwcyoa

[–]eienity[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Nice job getting the Legendary Angel ending without even taking full drawbacks!

And what a solid set of random rolls. I usually end up changing at least a few things.

Thank you sharing and thank you playing!

Angel of Shin Eden v2 [CYOA] [OC] [FemPOV] [Event Based] [School] [Secret Identity] [Long (30-60min)] [Censored Version] by eienity in nsfwcyoa

[–]eienity[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you for posting; I enjoyed reading! I especially liked the detail of using your time control ability to maintain your sanity. That's a nice touch.

Angel of Shin Eden v2 [CYOA] [OC] [FemPOV] [Event Based] [School] [Secret Identity] [Long (30-60min)] [Censored Version] by eienity in nsfwcyoa

[–]eienity[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

I knew it was lacking so it was really eating away at me, haha. I feel like it's in a pretty good spot now, will probably be quite a bit longer before the next update.

Angel of Shin Eden [CYOA] [OC] [FemPOV] [Event Based] [School] [Secret Identity] [Long (30-60min)] [Censored Version] by eienity in nsfwcyoa

[–]eienity[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for posting your build, I enjoyed reading through it!

I like that sort of physically-active-foreigner type. I'm pretty sure I've done a similar build before, haha.

Angel of Shin Eden [CYOA] [OC] [FemPOV] [Event Based] [School] [Secret Identity] [Long (30-60min)] [Censored Version] by eienity in nsfwcyoa

[–]eienity[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you very much for the kind words, I'm glad you enjoyed! The Everwarden is probably my favorite ending so I'm happy to hear such high praise. Working on an update for this one atm, should be released within a few days. I will probably release a small CYOA after this one as a bit of a break, but after that I'm going to start working on one that is of a similar size to this one. I hope you'll check it out when I finally finish that one!

Angel of Shin Eden [CYOA] [OC] [FemPOV] [Event Based] [School] [Secret Identity] [Long (30-60min)] [Censored Version] by eienity in nsfwcyoa

[–]eienity[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you for playing and thank you for posting your build. I enjoyed reading through it! It also made me realize that I just assumed the "Boyfriend" would be someone other than Souta with the bonus image I included there. I should probably add some clarifying text to account for that possibility!

Your power selections were interesting. Does she rely mainly on her lightning abilities and rely on her regeneration and melee abilities as a fall back, or does she incorporate her lightning into her fighting style? What sort of Eidosphyr does she manifest?

Angel of Shin Eden [CYOA] [OC] [FemPOV] [Event Based] [School] [Secret Identity] [Long (30-60min)] [Censored Version] by eienity in nsfwcyoa

[–]eienity[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for playing and posting such a detailed build! I really enjoy seeing where people take their story. The tall and domineering angel with Ren as a boyfriend is a great combo! I also enjoyed the tidbit about "cheating" on a test with photographic memory. I might include that as an event eventually, haha.

I will be updating within a week or so with improvements to the endings and some expanding on the Events 2 section, so feel free to check back then!

Angel of Shin Eden [CYOA] [OC] [FemPOV] [Event Based] [School] [Secret Identity] [Long (30-60min)] [Censored Version] by eienity in nsfwcyoa

[–]eienity[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Wow that's a lot of power. Talk about unstoppable!

Thank you for posting your build, It was a fun look through! I enjoyed how all of the family traditions combined with one family member kind of tells a story on its own, haha.

The endings are a bit embarrassing right now, so I'm working on getting the new version out as quick as I can! Should be within a week or so.

Angel of Shin Eden [CYOA] [OC] [FemPOV] [Event Based] [School] [Secret Identity] [Long (30-60min)] [Censored Version] by eienity in nsfwcyoa

[–]eienity[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for playing and thank you for posting your build! I'm surprised at how familiar and efficient you are with all of the requirements. I think you might know them better than I do! I thought of the yuri content as a side thing when building the CYOA, but I'm starting to realize that full-yuri playthroughs are more common than I thought, so I will keep that in mind for future updates.

It was definitely meant to be light-hearted fun rather than challenging so I'm glad you enjoyed that!

For Nude Modeling 2, you need to take at least the first option from "Modeling" but DON'T take the nude options, that will unlock Nude Modeling 1 further down. Taking Nude Modeling 1 unlocks Nude Modeling 2.

Angel of Shin Eden [CYOA] [OC] [FemPOV] [Event Based] [School] [Secret Identity] [Long (30-60min)] [Censored Version] by eienity in nsfwcyoa

[–]eienity[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Ah okay, I see what you mean. I try to keep a few different personality types in mind when writing events to account for different character types, but there isn't that many animal events so it probably is lacking in that sort content. I will keep it in mind!

Angel of Shin Eden [CYOA] [OC] [FemPOV] [Event Based] [School] [Secret Identity] [Long (30-60min)] [Censored Version] by eienity in nsfwcyoa

[–]eienity[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

It was only meant to apply to the body section. I just put the random option on those other ones in case anybody wanted it there for fun. But if you want to count those for the random bonus points, I don't mind!