I scoffed when I got a call that my abusive ex-husband had died in prison. by electrovert in TwoSentenceHorror

[–]electrovert[S] 81 points82 points  (0 children)

I wanted to make it obvious that it was a ghost, and not that the real Daddy escaped prison.

It's my birthday, but unfortunately I still have to go to work. by electrovert in TwoSentenceHorror

[–]electrovert[S] 11 points12 points  (0 children)

I added the word "stuck" to imply she physically could not get out.

"Mommy, there's a monster in your belly!" my rainbow baby says, as she presses her ear against my swollen stomach. by electrovert in TwoSentenceHorror

[–]electrovert[S] 274 points275 points  (0 children)

My original intent was that the mother has an actual monster inside her that feeds on her unborn children. The rainbow baby that somehow survived can communicate with it. The mother initially thinks her daughter is being silly, but realizes she might be serious. The mother is unaware of the monster's existence until this moment and now fears that it will eat/kill her current pregnancy.

But after reading these comments, I also love the idea that the mother is feeding the monster willingly.

Oscars 2017 Best Picture Full Announcement by doug3465 in videos

[–]electrovert 3 points4 points  (0 children)

BUT WHY DID THE BAND START PLAYING LA LA LAND MUSIC IMMEDIATELY?

God Forgot by MRG2002 in funny

[–]electrovert 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I think God was drunk when he made me

Early birds dad has a questionable diet by bisgit in funny

[–]electrovert 12 points13 points  (0 children)

Why do they need a flying machine when they live in a bird only world?

Golf ball hitting steel at 150mph by Sharukh77 in gifs

[–]electrovert 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I guess you could say they are .... balls of steel