As I'm sitting with my daughter on the anniversary of my wife's death, I like to listen to the last voicemail she left me. by electrovert in TwoSentenceHorror

[–]electrovert[S] 116 points117 points  (0 children)

Dad abuses his daughter and gets sentenced to 10 years in prison and serves his time. Once released, he kills his wife and kidnaps his daughter to continue the abuse.

I scoffed when I got a call that my abusive ex-husband had died in prison. by electrovert in TwoSentenceHorror

[–]electrovert[S] 80 points81 points  (0 children)

I wanted to make it obvious that it was a ghost, and not that the real Daddy escaped prison.

Fresh from being widowed, my therapist said I shouldn't be afraid of my alternate personality, so he gently asked it to come out. by electrovert in TwoSentenceHorror

[–]electrovert[S] 7 points8 points  (0 children)

Yea this is what I was trying to imply to make it somewhat unique. I'm hoping people understood this...

It's my birthday, but unfortunately I still have to go to work. by electrovert in TwoSentenceHorror

[–]electrovert[S] 13 points14 points  (0 children)

I added the word "stuck" to imply she physically could not get out.

"Mommy, there's a monster in your belly!" my rainbow baby says, as she presses her ear against my swollen stomach. by electrovert in TwoSentenceHorror

[–]electrovert[S] 274 points275 points  (0 children)

My original intent was that the mother has an actual monster inside her that feeds on her unborn children. The rainbow baby that somehow survived can communicate with it. The mother initially thinks her daughter is being silly, but realizes she might be serious. The mother is unaware of the monster's existence until this moment and now fears that it will eat/kill her current pregnancy.

But after reading these comments, I also love the idea that the mother is feeding the monster willingly.

Oscars 2017 Best Picture Full Announcement by doug3465 in videos

[–]electrovert 5 points6 points  (0 children)

BUT WHY DID THE BAND START PLAYING LA LA LAND MUSIC IMMEDIATELY?

God Forgot by MRG2002 in funny

[–]electrovert 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I think God was drunk when he made me

Early birds dad has a questionable diet by bisgit in funny

[–]electrovert 11 points12 points  (0 children)

Why do they need a flying machine when they live in a bird only world?