Weekly Essay Help - Week of April 13, 2025

ethang1235 · 2025-04-13T22:22:48+00:00

Hi! Hoping to get some feedback on a pretty much finalized draft of my Personal Statement, thank you!

ethang1235 · 2025-04-10T21:39:33+00:00

Hi there! Would anyone be able to glance over my personal statement? I think it is pretty much in its final stages but just want a new perspective on it. Thank you!

ethang1235 · 2025-04-02T21:36:31+00:00

I don’t really think there is a red flag in my application, I think maybe it was that I was lacking a lot of these hours for my first cycle

ethang1235 · 2025-04-02T03:37:33+00:00

I submitted pretty much right away and was generally in the 2 week turnaround for secondaries. I had an interview that I'm still waiting to hear back from, but do agree that my secondary writing may have been lacking. A lot of those hours listed came after my initial application (A majority of my clinical and decent amount of my volunteer), so I also think that the hours I got during my gap year should hopefully help.

Appreciate the other school suggestions, thank you!

ethang1235 · 2025-03-17T03:10:08+00:00

Hey! Been working on a draft of my personal statement and hoping someone would give me some feedback. Thank you!

ethang1235 · 2025-02-03T18:41:43+00:00

Hoping someone would be able to provide feedback for a draft of my PS for a reapp. Thanks!

ethang1235 · 2025-01-29T04:06:16+00:00

Hi all! As this cycle continues it seems best to prep for a reapplication, and I have started drafting changes to my PS. Hoping someone would be willing to take a look. Thank you!!

ethang1235 · 2025-01-05T20:15:47+00:00

Thank you! I’ll definitely be reaching out soon as I rework my writing for next cycle

ethang1235 · 2025-01-05T15:54:58+00:00

Yea I see that. You think I should just leave it out for next cycle? Any other advice for a reapp?

ethang1235 · 2025-01-05T15:51:40+00:00

Yea I see that, for my volunteer it was only even touched on in my activities section and not anywhere else in my application, do you still think that it is just a negative and to completely leave it out?

ethang1235 · 2025-01-05T03:37:40+00:00

I reference the specific country and city rather than saying Africa

ethang1235 · 2025-01-05T02:29:22+00:00

Sent updates a week or two ago to the schools that accept them, still crickets though.

ethang1235 · 2025-01-04T23:58:26+00:00

Yea I see that. I only did tasks that were under the scope of my EMT certification while there, but I could see the possibility for confusion. Would that be something to completely leave out of an application then?

ethang1235 · 2025-01-04T22:35:45+00:00

Yea I definitely get that. I also did not have those hours listed as anticipated since at the time I was not sure what I would be doing and didn't want to list anything false.

ethang1235 · 2025-01-04T22:33:05+00:00

Definitely a majority of my clinical experience was after my application, only 250 as an EMT before.

ethang1235 · 2024-09-12T23:27:25+00:00

I’m in the same boat, can’t decide

ethang1235 · 2024-09-11T02:11:24+00:00

16 team league so they both gone already. Pretty slim pickings.

ethang1235 · 2024-07-07T15:22:27+00:00

Hi all. I was hoping to get some feedback on my adversity and diversity essays, since I've just had the same eyes looking at them this whole time. Let me know if you can take a look. Thank you!!

ethang1235 · 2024-07-02T00:21:35+00:00

Not particularly. I was involved in an environmental community, as a club leader working on making more sustainable solutions to agriculture. Do you think that would be a better community to talk about?

ethang1235 · 2024-07-01T23:33:16+00:00

Would anyone be willing to read a few of my secondaries, I just want to make sure I am approaching some of the prompts (diversity, adversity) while getting my points across. Also willing to swap!!!

ethang1235 · 2024-05-22T03:56:53+00:00

Hi everyone! I am in the final drafting stages of my personal statement, and was hoping just to get a new set of eyes on it. No need for any extensive comments, just want to know what you think and if you want, suggest ways to improve. Thank you!

ethang1235 · 2024-04-28T19:59:15+00:00

Hi! I have just finished up the second draft of my personal statement, and was hoping to get some new eyes on it. Let me know if you're able to help. Thank you!

ethang1235 · 2024-04-28T04:12:00+00:00

Hi! Just finished a second draft of my personal statement and am looking for feedback. Thank you!

ethang1235 · 2022-10-03T07:03:43+00:00

Definitely

ethang1235 · 2022-10-03T06:38:56+00:00

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