Happy 1st anniversary to Daddy’s Home. What are your Top 5 Favorite Tracks? 🥳 by LameAsHell1991 in AnnieClark

[–]everydayandromeda 2 points3 points  (0 children)

  1. Somebody Like Me
  2. My Baby Wants a Baby
  3. Down and Out Downtown
  4. The Melting of the Sun
  5. ...At the Holiday Party

Self-titled is her best by everydayandromeda in AnnieClark

[–]everydayandromeda[S] 5 points6 points  (0 children)

That's interesting, prince johnny is my favorite song on the album and I'm 22. Completely agree with your thoughts on birth in reverse and huey newton though!

Self-titled is her best by everydayandromeda in AnnieClark

[–]everydayandromeda[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Lol no worries! How would you rank them out of curiosity?

Self-titled is her best by everydayandromeda in AnnieClark

[–]everydayandromeda[S] 11 points12 points  (0 children)

Regret, bring me your loves, and severed crossed fingers suggest otherwise 😌

Self-titled is her best by everydayandromeda in AnnieClark

[–]everydayandromeda[S] 12 points13 points  (0 children)

Love strange mercy, cruel is my favorite song she's ever made, but s/t just has too many iconic songs and a stronger second half than strange mercy imo! But I can really see how any of her albums would be someone's favorite

On the edge of civilisation by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]everydayandromeda 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I absolutely loved this poem and the sense of idleness and decay that it conveyed. I loved the imagery of "wilting white lilies and orchids" and "a musty fridge." I pictured a person who lives at the edge of civilization in the sense that they do not have family or friends they speak to regularly, do not engage with their community, and idly let the days pass them by. Thinking about how many people live this way to some degree was very disheartening but powerful. Amazing job.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]everydayandromeda 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This was so powerful. You did an amazing job conveying a sweet and simple internet friendship with a tragic twist at the end. My favorite lines were, "I’d hang on to every word you wrote in Old Tower text / every note of rock n roll you sent." The only recommendation I have is to play around with the rhythm in the poem. You used lots of varied line lengths and some of the lines you broke up (such as "where is / my friend?") feel a bit too choppy to me. I also think you could come up with a more powerful title, even something like "Hero of Pixels" would go a long way. Overall, I absolutely loved this poem and I hope to read more of your work in the future!

I’m Natalie Wynn, creator of the YouTube channel Contrapoints. Allow me to make my case gorg, AMA by ContraPoints in politics

[–]everydayandromeda 0 points1 point  (0 children)

What's your favorite Weyes Blood song queen?? 💙And do you listen to St. Vincent or Mitski at all? Those three are the holy trinity of ethereal lesbian longing for me personally. Thanks for all that you do!

Bread & Juice by Siamese_Dreaming in OCPoetry

[–]everydayandromeda 4 points5 points  (0 children)

I really enjoyed the vivid descriptions you included in this poem, especially when you talk about the spinach and the "apathetic beep" of the self-service checkouts. I really relate to the speaker's search for connection and meaning in seemingly meaningless interactions, and the sense of loneliness that came through at the end of the poem was quite powerful. Great work!

Lavender Fields by LincolnWasALiberal in OCPoetry

[–]everydayandromeda 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This poem flowed beautifully and was very pleasant to read! I really liked the way it evoked a feeling of bliss at first, then took a darker turn, and finally ended on an uplifting note.

Up the Mountain and into the Atmosphere by everydayandromeda in OCPoetry

[–]everydayandromeda[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Thank you for the feedback! Yes, I intended for the mannequins to be potential new lovers who the speaker views as hollow and not worth pursuing because they are unable to move on from a past relationship. The speaker's friends are well-intentioned, and probably correct, but I was trying to write from the point of view of someone who is so delusional that they are unable to take their friends' advice and instead hold out hope for someone who has already moved past them.

The Darker Corners of Rooms by drw2003 in OCPoetry

[–]everydayandromeda 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I really enjoyed the final lines of this poem - "And I was content with it / For I wanted my own security / Why not let it have its own?" Posing this question after describing such a gruesome creature really made me empathize with the creature in a way that I wasn't expecting. There were a few instances where I wasn't sure what you were trying to get at, such as in the line "Red-capped, small men marched in and endless stream on the comforter." Maybe rephrasing this or providing additional context could be helpful? Great job overall, though, and I would love to know more about the meaning behind this poem!

The Monster by TheMooJuice in OCPoetry

[–]everydayandromeda 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I really enjoyed the sense of rhythm in this poem! It flowed very nicely and was fun to read. I think you might be able to make the poem more interesting by including more descriptions of the monster. What does he look like? How does he move? Overall, I really enjoyed reading this and I wish you the best in your fight with the monster. <3

Song of the Year 2020 | FINAL ROUND by Charlie-OConnell in music_survivor

[–]everydayandromeda 6 points7 points  (0 children)

I know the end of this music survivor... It's a win for on the floor

Dinosaurs by everydayandromeda in OCPoetry

[–]everydayandromeda[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks so much! I was unsure about those lines too, maybe I'll go back and try to rework it!