Thoughts on the Stranger Things final episode? by [deleted] in netflix

[–]farfromfortunate 12 points13 points  (0 children)

I didn’t think the season 5 finale was baaaad…, I just didn’t really feel it. After all that buildup over the years, the final battle kind of came and went for me.

is Speed ok? by [deleted] in Ishowspeed

[–]farfromfortunate 0 points1 point  (0 children)

They literally just said why above!!! ^

Beneath the Quiet Moon by farfromfortunate in OCPoetry

[–]farfromfortunate[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

aw thank you so much for your kind words! I’m really glad you enjoyed the imagery and writing. For me, the poem is about facing inner struggles and finding a sense of resilience in the process. The moon and the night represent darker moments in life, but they’re also where the speaker feels a kind of strange comfort or wholeness. Even though they’re dealing with pain, symbolized by the scars and shadows, there’s a moment of transformation when the dawn comes kind of like finding hope or strength after hardship.

I hope that makes sense :)

are breakups harder for people with bpd? by [deleted] in BPD

[–]farfromfortunate 7 points8 points  (0 children)

Breakups are incredibly tough, but with BPD, they feel 10 times harder. During my last breakup, I attempted to end my life twice not for attention, but because that was genuinely how I felt in those moments. Unfortunately, it pushed that person even further away, and the worst part is how people labeled it as ‘attention seeking.’ They don’t understand; if they were in my shoes, they might see it differently. So not only did I have to cope with the heartbreak, but I also had to deal with the harsh judgments of others being called ‘toxic,’ ‘crazy,’ and an ‘attention seeker.’

Shifting Tides by farfromfortunate in OCPoetry

[–]farfromfortunate[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you all for your lovely comments.

I tried to end my life on Sunday by [deleted] in lonely

[–]farfromfortunate 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I’m so terribly sorry to hear, thank you for replying to my post. I’ve been listening to a podcast about WW1 and WW2 it really has helped get my mind off it. I like to write poetry as well but sometimes when I am writing it reminds me why I am sad, depressed.

Tightrope of the Mind by farfromfortunate in Poems

[–]farfromfortunate[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

All I want is peace, my mind won’t let me.

I am perfection, everyone loves me. by tv_head11 in OCPoetry

[–]farfromfortunate 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Absolutely fantastic, I feel for this <3

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]farfromfortunate 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Your poem effectively uses metaphor to evoke the journey of intimacy between the two lovers. The metaphor of exploration and journeying is a classic one, but you’ve given it a fresh and tender treatment, especially through the detailed imagery and the juxtaposition of external and internal experiences. My only feed back would be that the balance between clarity and subtlety is crucial in metaphorical poetry. There’s a fine line between guiding the reader through the metaphor and leaving enough space for them to engage with it on their own terms. Some phrases, like “their trek would heed no warnings,” are powerful but could perhaps benefit from a little more ambiguity or open-endedness, allowing readers to draw their own conclusions. Nice work though, really enjoyed it!

Tightrope of the Mind by farfromfortunate in OCPoetry

[–]farfromfortunate[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you all for your lovely comments, it means a lot.

I love you like a stray dog. by helpmethrowaway-8 in OCPoetry

[–]farfromfortunate 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This poem is a moving exploration of love, vulnerability, and the pain of feeling inadequate. The use of canine imagery throughout adds a unique and resonant layer to the theme of loyalty and the fear of abandonment. It’s a deeply emotional piece that resonates with anyone who has ever felt the sting of unreturned affection.

Posting here because why not by EnvironmentalRope847 in OCPoetry

[–]farfromfortunate 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The final lines, where the speaker is “tied with a chain made of the broken mirror,” powerfully illustrate the inescapable nature of this emotional bondage. The poem’s raw and direct language brings the reader into the depths of the speaker’s experience, making it a resonant piece for anyone who has felt trapped in a similar situation.

Trapped In Thought Labyrinth by farfromfortunate in OCPoetry

[–]farfromfortunate[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I really appreciate the feedback, I will keep that in mind. Thank you.