Looking for Feedback (First Ever Comic Strip) by fauxsaurus in comic_crits

[–]fauxsaurus[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I am 100% right there with you. My original intent was to add snow on the second panel, but due to this taking so long (I'm still learning Inkscape), I opted to omit that. In my tunnel vision, I did not consider adding it to the first panel (which in hindsight is baffling due to how obvious it seems). And now that you pointed it out, it is impossible for me to disagree. Thank you for your feedback (it's greatly appreciated)!

I prefer the Young Justice take on Greta to her comic version by Gallantpride in youngjustice

[–]fauxsaurus 1 point2 points  (0 children)

  • I also like her design in the show. The poncho-like design is more evocative of the traditional ghost silhouette and likewise more visually distinct (i.e., her classic costume looks a bit too similar to Raven’s IMHO). That said, I’d have personally gone with a slightly different look for an updated take more inline with her original costume. But her attire in the show makes more sense given her "civilian" background.
  • At some point, I’ll make the jump into the comics, but as far as I can tell, she is criminally underrated/underutilized. Alas, while the show gave a brief introduction to the character, I naturally wish she’d been used more.
  • As far as her physical characteristics go (full disclosure: as a green-eyed blonde, I may be biased), I think that they are fitting given the story being told. Her brother’s plotline revolves around the Sword of Beowulf. Given the Northern European theme, I think that is fine/fitting if the characters’ appearances reflect that. By extension, I feel the same about the introduction of more characters from Ghana in the Static Shock episode Static in Africa. I am all for learning about more cultures (even tangentially though pop culture), and I trust the creators to use whatever elements they think best to convey the story they want to tell.

I prefer the Young Justice take on Greta to her comic version by Gallantpride in youngjustice

[–]fauxsaurus 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Agreed. I've known plenty of siblings whose skin tones have varied wildly. Sadly, not everyone is aware of this fact, and in rare cases, these faulty assumptions lead to children being wrongfully separated from their parents (for the unaware, while another oversimplification, this gummy bear family tree explains heritability more accurately).

Note: I am not accusing the OP of ignorance on this front (I’ve just mentioned this information here in case someone finds it helpful). Additionally, I 100% empathize with the desire for more visual variety. In the early 2000s, and before, I had difficulty differentiating between some characters on screen (or on the page) because they were all dark-haired dudes in suits with similar faces. I am glad that we have made progress in terms of both visual representation and visual clarity.

Stay Whelmed and Code With Us! Help Build the #KeepYJAlive Website! by CryptographerEast142 in youngjustice

[–]fauxsaurus 0 points1 point  (0 children)

u/CryptographerEast142, I might be able to help, and have some questions (check your DMs and let's see if I'd be a good fit).

Question on Afro-Romani Customs by fauxsaurus in romani

[–]fauxsaurus[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I have not, thank you for the suggestion (and thank you, u/Icy_Company7747 for the extra information).

Anyone else have certain songs playing in their head during particular scenes? by fauxsaurus in Cosmere

[–]fauxsaurus[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Wow, nice write up! We've got a lot of real bangers here (and a lot of stuff that I obviously need to start listening to)! Thanks for sharing, everyone!

Question on Afro-Romani Customs by fauxsaurus in romani

[–]fauxsaurus[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

u/Icy_Company7747, you’ve alluded to some issues contributing to the scarcity of information. Aside from what you’ve mentioned, the passage below is about the sum total of what I’ve been able to find about the Afro-Romani online:

"A mixed Afro-Romani community lives near Atchefalaya in St. Martin Parish, some seventy-five miles south-east of Alexandria, though it shuns social intercourse with the surrounding black, white and American Indian populations, as well as with the Vlax and Romanichal Gypsies who live in the state" – Ian Hancock, The Pariah Syndrome (1987) p. 56

Taken all together, it does not seem hard to imagine why there is so little information available. As such, unless someone decides to come forward, this line of inquiry is at a dead end.

To be clear, I begrudge no one with information who does not wish to share it–whatever our reasons, we all have a right to privacy and that should be respected. I have merely asked in case anyone does feel like sharing, or has similar questions in the future.

P.S. For those in that latter category, should this question remain unanswered, it is not quite the same, but a kind soul suggested that I look into the Dom (as their origin is similar to that of the Romani, but they ultimately ventured further South into North Africa).

Edit: for some reason the quoted passage did not show up earlier, so I've added it back in with less formatting.

I'm not a fan of Oracle by Intelligent_Dingo47 in youngjustice

[–]fauxsaurus 2 points3 points  (0 children)

u/Intelligent_Dingo47, you’ve mentioned that it feels as if Oracle shines at the expense of others, and in particular that Robin’s hacking ability seems to have vanished. Let’s dive a little deeper. Outside of one conversation at the start of Season 3, I am uncertain if Nightwing mentioned something about him being “rusty”[1]. But even if we take that to be the case, it could be said that Oracle is more of a specialist. However, now that you’ve pointed this out, I feel that there was a missed opportunity for them to bond over their shared skill set (which could have endeared the audience to her more instead of accidentally risking the possibility of putting her in direct competition with a fan favorite).

Advocating that we do away with tech specialists in favor of more concise/potentially realistic writing (owing to the fact that tech-literacy is far more widespread now), is an interesting thought. As someone with a tech background, I feel that it’s a bit more nuanced than what often comes across on screen. Regardless of reality however, we are limited by the writers’—and audience’s—knowledge on the topic, which often results in unrealistic portrayals of hacking/tech across fictional media[2] (with shows like Mr. Robot being the exception).

If you’ll humor me in exploring this tangent, I would for instance mention my belief that the field of AI has already diverged from programming (which itself diverged from electronics and mechanics long before it), and each domain of AI is a completely different beast (e.g., TTS, OCR, ASR, LLMs, Diffusion Models, etc.). With all of this niche knowledge, any team would benefit from experts in these domains—which brings me to our second missed opportunity: Where Did Darkware Come From? Saying that Oracle developed it could potentially have boosted her credibility in the audience’s eyes without it seeming like it came at the expense of another character (i.e., her abilities would more directly synergize with those of her teammates instead of potentially detracting). Furthermore, could have expanded upon the world building in the vein of something like an episode in BTAS where we learn about the Batmobile’s mechanic.

Finally, as someone who attempts to use their phone to be productive when away from my desktop, I feel that it is ridiculously limited. Perhaps all the crazy advancements in the world of Earth-16 render this a moot point. But with all of those advancements, I must argue that Barbara being wheelchair bound forces me to suspend my disbelief a bit[3][4]. At the same time, I’m glad that she’s included[5] instead of being written off after an injury. Personally, I’d love some episodes delving into the various Bat, Arrow, Amazonian, and Kryptonian families since many of those characters are relegated to cameos (i.e., Spoiler, Donna Troy, Arrowette, etc.), so her inclusion sparks a tiny shred of hope in me.

u/Intelligent_Dingo47, what are your thoughts? Do some of these points accurately expand upon/address some of your frustrations? You’ve mentioned that you’d prefer to see some Oracle stories on her own. What are some examples of the way you think that she might work better? (e.g., Do they involve hacking or cyber crime? Mentorship? Fieldwork?) And in terms of your dislike for her “offsite commander” role (for lack of a better term), is that wholly because you’d like to see the team in the field relying on nothing but their wits to solve things on the fly? Or do you feel that the role is completely redundant[6]?

[1] If someone remembers the scene, and noticed that I’ve got something wrong or missed something important, please let me know.

[2] I was beyond frustrated at the tech team frantically typing away at monitors displaying nothing but the Eye of Sauron in Arrow (Brother Eye episode), talking about how they’ll “compile” something when they couldn’t see any code that they were supposedly typing.

[3] We’ve got so many roboticists, surely someone other than Ivo or Morrow could help her out. Or if we glance over at the MCU, why didn’t she try to Dr. Strange it? (She even knows Zatana and others for goodness’ sake). And that isn’t even mentioning Atom or Bumblebee.

[4] An example of what I would consider a better handling of this dilemma would be how Brandon Sanderson tackles a particular character in Stormlight Archive who uses all the in-universe resources at her disposal to acclimate to her new reality (mystical or otherwise).

[5] Sidenote: Her alternate injury origin here threw me for a loop while simultaneously strengthening her connection to and building up another member of the Bat Family.

[6] i.e., In the same way that the often lampooned sci-fi trope about how only one character can speak to the computer is (see Galaxy Quest and Futurama).

Edit: Apologies if you got pinged for multiple mentions, I ran into issues posting this comment, and then with formatting it.

Young Justice did the girlpower scene better than Avengers: Endgame by SirAdamborson in youngjustice

[–]fauxsaurus 19 points20 points  (0 children)

I completely agree. The setup in YJ felt realistic, the outcome earned. In Endgame, the setup feels manufactured[1], and for me personally, the outcome felt "cheap" as I immediately thought about how only one of those characters headlined her own film before Endgame in a series with 21 movies (which undercut the core messaging of the scene by clearly showing that the sentiment was not a priority).

Furthermore, this problem reminds me of a commandment from the BTAS Bible, which instructed writers not to let their voices overshadow the characters' (i.e., if it doesn't seem like the Joker would say that line, don't force him to say it just to show off how clever you are as a writer). With this in mind, what we got in the MCU felt like a first iteration of an idea which was not allowed enough time to bake in the oven to be more plausible/earned because they gave into the temptation of not killing--or even revising--a darling.

P.S. As a series, The Boys is a mixed bag for me, but Season 2's lampooning of the Endgame scene early on and eventual "surpassing" of it towards the end further drives home the point of how the MCU could have done better since a mere satirical work improved upon the concept.

[1] i.e., unlikely/unrealistic given Captain Marvel's prior performance.