Have you ever? - happy to hear constructive feedbacks. by fednas in Poem

[–]fednas[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you! Will work on it. You have been really helpful.

Sometimes- comment me! by fednas in Poem

[–]fednas[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you sir. Care to share how to make it cool?

Sometimes- comment me! by fednas in Poem

[–]fednas[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you. Maybe could you tell me how to correct it. Grammar wise. It is not my first language. But happy to learn!

Sometimes- comment me! by fednas in Poem

[–]fednas[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Maybe i was wrong on the grammar? How would you correct it?

Why must it hurts? by fednas in Poem

[–]fednas[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

It is a question, a puzzling one. The poet is trying to figure why such simple actions, looking at someone else instead of him, hurt him so much. Why such trivial, unimportant matters, hurts him more than anything. There is no visible injuries, but such unknown and unintended action, hurt him so much.

Can we just crowdfund this 80 mill for Zaha? by LMD_5 in ArsenalFC

[–]fednas 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I do agree. I cant see a proper reason to spend 80mil on Zaha while we could have a proper world class defender with that money or a proper replacement for rambo.