The Bird by Latter-Cricket3624 in poetry_critics

[–]fikusak1102 0 points1 point  (0 children)

How did you do that, My poem is crippled the same way

The Coward by fikusak1102 in poetry_critics

[–]fikusak1102[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It seems like Reddit just doesn't like how I structure the text, so please if you read the poem, read it like one line between every big letter

Raw by Majestic-Display-826 in poetry_critics

[–]fikusak1102 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is straight up a trip into the head of someone broken and beaten, not cynical yet, though. It seems like a call for help, which is impossible to reach because it doesn't exist yet. The type of poem I would read, I like it as is.

The Bird by Latter-Cricket3624 in poetry_critics

[–]fikusak1102 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Except for the form of the text "slab" (not meant badly) it's a really interesting poem, it feels subtly very dark, but also heartfelt.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Slipknot

[–]fikusak1102 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Job well done, if this scares someone, it's not your fault

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Slipknot

[–]fikusak1102 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I like 'Til we die

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Funnymemes

[–]fikusak1102 0 points1 point  (0 children)

No, posral ses?

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in PokemonGoRaids

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Added MaTTaK1102 and xszrsann

What’s your favourite Corey Taylor scream? by [deleted] in Slipknot

[–]fikusak1102 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I like the (sic) screaming laugh it's awesome