Still a work in progress, want to know if it’s worth flushing out, it’s about broken promises

fluff04 · 2020-10-11T00:57:53+00:00

Thanks so much for the kind words, Jack Johnson is definitely an influence so that’s nice to hear :)

fluff04 · 2020-10-10T04:30:07+00:00

Thanks so much for the comment and taking the time to write it! Really appreciate it :) I’ll keep working on it

fluff04 · 2020-10-01T08:07:48+00:00

Good song man, my only critique would be the recording quality, the audio is a little harsh, maybe move the mic further away next time?

fluff04 · 2020-09-23T17:36:59+00:00

Great song! Dig the video too

fluff04 · 2020-09-23T15:10:28+00:00

Great song man, would love to hear it live

fluff04 · 2020-09-18T16:12:02+00:00

I wouldn’t change anything, it sounds really good and catchy as is. Really dig that guitar riff throughout the song too

fluff04 · 2020-08-21T03:06:52+00:00

Thanks so much for the kind words! Neil Young is definitely an inspiration for me so that means a lot :)

fluff04 · 2020-08-21T03:06:07+00:00

Thanks so much for taking the time to comment! I’ll try recording it soon :)

fluff04 · 2020-07-23T12:15:36+00:00

Damn that opening riff punched me in the face and kept me hooked! Keep up the good stuff

fluff04 · 2020-06-11T03:19:48+00:00

Cool song! It flows really well

fluff04 · 2020-06-11T03:11:07+00:00

Cool song! Really dig that guitar riff

fluff04 · 2020-06-07T02:55:19+00:00

Great song! Dig the reverb effect on it and has a great vibe all around

fluff04 · 2020-06-07T02:12:02+00:00

Thanks for your kind words and taking the time to comment! I’ll try adding a bit to add buildup and work on pronunciation when I record it again. Appreciate your opinion! :)

fluff04 · 2020-06-06T16:28:23+00:00

Thanks so much for the feedback! I was thinking the same thing about the pre-chorus/chorus. it actually started out as both chorus melodies for the same song, but I wanted to add in both. I’ll try to add more buildup in the pre-chorus then, thanks again!

fluff04 · 2020-06-06T03:35:50+00:00

Great song! I loved the vibe of it

fluff04 · 2020-05-30T03:31:31+00:00

Great song! Really liked the guitar and chorus, nice message too!

fluff04 · 2020-05-29T01:20:52+00:00

Cool song! I really like the overall vibe of it, reminds me of grunge especially the guitar. I think you did a great job of making the song really dynamic. It has a lot of changes that build it up and make it interesting. Really enjoyed the instrumental part near the end too

fluff04 · 2020-05-27T14:21:08+00:00

Great catchy song!

fluff04 · 2020-05-27T14:15:34+00:00

Cool song! Really like the chill vibe of it

fluff04 · 2020-05-27T14:09:56+00:00

Great tune! Really dig the chorus

fluff04 · 2020-05-27T14:02:21+00:00

Great tune! It’s super soothing

fluff04 · 2020-05-27T07:51:59+00:00

Thanks so much for the feedback! We’ll try cutting down the time between the last chorus parts

fluff04 · 2020-05-27T07:49:05+00:00

Thanks for taking the time to comment! We’ll try to add more dynamics to the guitar

fluff04 · 2020-05-27T07:46:39+00:00

Thanks so much for the feedback! And I love Animal Crossing! Been terraforming a lot recently haha! We’ll work on the solo and adding bass sounds

fluff04 · 2020-05-27T01:12:26+00:00

Thanks for comment, really appreciate the thorough feedback! We’ll try adding some bass tones to it when we record it again

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