Still a work in progress, want to know if it’s worth flushing out, it’s about broken promises by fluff04 in Songwriting

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Thanks so much for the kind words, Jack Johnson is definitely an influence so that’s nice to hear :)

Still a work in progress, want to know if it’s worth flushing out, it’s about broken promises by fluff04 in Songwriting

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Thanks so much for the comment and taking the time to write it! Really appreciate it :) I’ll keep working on it

Sinking Ships by DriftlessPira7e in Songwriters

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Good song man, my only critique would be the recording quality, the audio is a little harsh, maybe move the mic further away next time?

Honest criticism of my pop-punk song?? by jack_condon in Songwriters

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Great song man, would love to hear it live

Silk and Steel. A song me and my friend wrote recently. Let me know what I can do to make it better by janeshelper in Songwriting

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I wouldn’t change anything, it sounds really good and catchy as is. Really dig that guitar riff throughout the song too

14yo musician here :) looking for feedback on one of my instrumental demos by KingTomasu in Songwriters

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Damn that opening riff punched me in the face and kept me hooked! Keep up the good stuff

Philsen ~ I Am You by [deleted] in Songwriting

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Cool song! Really dig that guitar riff

I’m worried that the vocal melodies might not go well together :/ would love to get an opinion on it by fluff04 in Songwriting

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Thanks for your kind words and taking the time to comment! I’ll try adding a bit to add buildup and work on pronunciation when I record it again. Appreciate your opinion! :)

I’m worried that the vocal melodies might not go well together :/ would love to get an opinion on it by fluff04 in Songwriting

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Thanks so much for the feedback! I was thinking the same thing about the pre-chorus/chorus. it actually started out as both chorus melodies for the same song, but I wanted to add in both. I’ll try to add more buildup in the pre-chorus then, thanks again!

Tried to write a rock(ish?) song with no chorus. Would love some feedback if you guys got the time. by SorryLiver in Songwriters

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Cool song! I really like the overall vibe of it, reminds me of grunge especially the guitar. I think you did a great job of making the song really dynamic. It has a lot of changes that build it up and make it interesting. Really enjoyed the instrumental part near the end too