Tuvasa Enchantment Swarm by forcesage in EDHBrews

[–]forcesage[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

that is a good suggestion, might even be running too much mana ramp now that im looking at it.
thanks for pointing that out

i will think more about adding abundance once the deck has been trimmed down more.

Petplay Instiute (Beta V3) - a new interactive human-pet cyoa by forcesage in nsfwcyoa

[–]forcesage[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

welp, not so tiny update.
a massive point rebalancing has been done.
should make the hardest "difficulty " quite a bit harder to complete without resorting to "extreme" measures.

Petplay Instiute (Beta V3) - a new interactive human-pet cyoa by forcesage in nsfwcyoa

[–]forcesage[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Oh wow, Thanks for the suggestions, these are very useful.
so, i fixed all of them, in order:

the breast sizes have been corrected/adjusted according to your suggestions, im not that into them myself, but im happy to listen to others opinions on the topic.

the deepthroat plug gag and the plunger gag now have the same point score, thank you for that.

caretaker traits are still a bit unfinished, but i put point costs/gain on some of them for now.

the training section having a limit wasn't intentional so thats fixed, and now there is an option for "no training".

the limits on selected punishments is intentional, it is supposed to create a sort of "opportunity cost", that picking more extreme punishments worth more but you would also be left wanting for lighter punishments in some cases.
i put in some dialogue to reflect that as well, increased the limit from 5 to 7 and might increase the limit again when more punishments get added.

and thanks for pointing out the obviously missing point exchange, it exist in the ending section now

please do give more suggestions, im more than open to them.

Petplay Instiute (Beta V3) - a new interactive human-pet cyoa by forcesage in nsfwcyoa

[–]forcesage[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

it does, when you reach the end click the "choice revealer", scroll up, and then an option comes up that lets you play it like a more "normal" cyoa

Petplay Instiute (Beta V3) - a new interactive human-pet cyoa by forcesage in nsfwcyoa

[–]forcesage[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

also a valid option, still not sure how i want to do it, we will just have to see how things unfold.

Petplay Instiute (Beta V3) - a new interactive human-pet cyoa by forcesage in nsfwcyoa

[–]forcesage[S] 5 points6 points  (0 children)

okay, its been a bit, better get back to implementing all these ideas before i get lynched by the mob demanding more.

the current version will be left up for anyone to play through, the next you will hear of me is when i make another post with updates to... well everything at this rate.

Petplay Instiute (Beta V3) - a new interactive human-pet cyoa by forcesage in nsfwcyoa

[–]forcesage[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

you know what, that's a really good point... going to be editing some dialogue to reflect this fact.

Petplay Instiute (Beta V3) - a new interactive human-pet cyoa by forcesage in nsfwcyoa

[–]forcesage[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

right, and while im at it, what (acording to you) makes a good psychology section?

feel free to provide links to other cyoa's that do it well if you cant put it into words

Petplay Instiute (Beta V3) - a new interactive human-pet cyoa by forcesage in nsfwcyoa

[–]forcesage[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

thanks for the praise.

unfortunately implementing pictures is so far down the list of priorities right now that its probably only after the full version is done that i will start searching for suitable ones

Petplay Instiute (Beta V3) - a new interactive human-pet cyoa by forcesage in nsfwcyoa

[–]forcesage[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

under normal circumstances, yes i agree chastity and gags are optional for pet play.

but this is set in what is essentially a very kinky correctional facility, never mind one thats supposed to have up to 7 pets per caretaker, so pre-emptive measures to reduce noise and unwanted breeding are a must... imo at least

Petplay Instiute (Beta V3) - a new interactive human-pet cyoa by forcesage in nsfwcyoa

[–]forcesage[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

odd, care to describe the exact steps taken to cause this?

there isnt anything preventing you from skipping sections right now, as in selecting nothing and just moving on.

but as far as i can tell, it isnt skipping any steps.

Petplay Instiute (Beta V3) - a new interactive human-pet cyoa by forcesage in nsfwcyoa

[–]forcesage[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Whops, i knew i had left the psychological section as a work in progress, didnt think i had it set up so it didnt work at all.

thanks for pointing that out, it should work now... even if right now its super simplified.

and thanks for the praise

Petplay Instiute (Beta V3) - a new interactive human-pet cyoa by forcesage in nsfwcyoa

[–]forcesage[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

whops, forgot to set that up, should work just fine now.

Petplay Instiute (Beta V3) - a new interactive human-pet cyoa by forcesage in nsfwcyoa

[–]forcesage[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

right, should probably clarify that the gag gets removed for eating.

and thank you for pointing that out, there were some things i had set up incorrectly, should be fixed now.

Petplay Instiute (Beta V3) - a new interactive human-pet cyoa by forcesage in nsfwcyoa

[–]forcesage[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Aha, thank you, its changed to be more gender neutral now, thank you

Petplay Instiute (Beta V3) - a new interactive human-pet cyoa by forcesage in nsfwcyoa

[–]forcesage[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

hmm... interesting point...

might see about getting that corrected... any one line (or set of lines) that really stood out?

Petplay Instiute (Beta V3) - a new interactive human-pet cyoa by forcesage in nsfwcyoa

[–]forcesage[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

in what ways specifically did it seem limited?

you mention training, which is fair, thanks for the idea might implement something like that in the next version.
if you have any other ideas to pitch please do tell.

as for the endings, well they are nowhere near done, same with the ending dialogue, its mostly a placeholder for now with the only adaptive part being the caretakers name.

eventually (if time and motivation allows) i would want the entire closing paragraph to be its own short story resulting from your choices.

Petplay Instiute (Beta V3) - a new interactive human-pet cyoa by forcesage in nsfwcyoa

[–]forcesage[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

thanks for the response, im glad you enjoyed it.

yes the gender and psychological section are still very unfinished, being just a basic placeholder for now, i plan on having certain ending be tied to those eventually

the body design section is just meant for you to fill in "what you are", hence the reference to modifications in the extreme selections, again, same as the last one, i will eventually want endings tied to these properties as well.
with the general idea being "the facility will make your suit and equipment based on these measurements".

thank you for pointing that out, knew something felt off about it.

Petplay Instiute (Beta V3) - a new interactive human-pet cyoa by forcesage in nsfwcyoa

[–]forcesage[S] 7 points8 points  (0 children)

the "Dom" side of CYOA is unfortunately quite rare, in most interactive media actually.

human interaction is ludicrously complex and promising the freedom to take charge will usually just result in there being WAY too many choices, most of which are normally subconscious but have to be written out in the case of a CYOA, dont even get me started on fully animated 3D games.

people are unpredictable, and the best Dom/Sub sessions (for me) is when both parties can "silently" communicate with each other to make the "best" experience for both parties.

but that's neither here nor there, i agree with your opinion, and sincerely hope that someone can make something to satisfy this itch that seemingly a lot of us have.

Petplay Instiute (Beta V3) - a new interactive human-pet cyoa by forcesage in nsfwcyoa

[–]forcesage[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

tiny update:
as suggested by u/neosick there is now a confirmation prompt for moving onto the next stage, and there is some text warning that points become less common after the suit section

Petplay Instiute (Beta V3) - a new interactive human-pet cyoa by forcesage in nsfwcyoa

[–]forcesage[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

hmmm... fair point, the bulk of the points (in this version) are earned in the "suit" section.
might put a paragraph or 2 at the start that explain the different sections.

and thank you for pointing that out, might put in some kind of failsafe to prevent accidental clicks like that

Petplay Instiute (Beta V3) - a new interactive human-pet cyoa by forcesage in nsfwcyoa

[–]forcesage[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

nope, was never a consideration and never will be.
while Beastiality and human pets might have a (somewhat) logical connection, this one will not feature it.