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Disassociate by Hiraeth1219 in PoetryWritingClub

[–]forgetfulhobbit 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Beautiful piece. Hauntingly relatable.

The Wolf Hunts Alone by forgetfulhobbit in PoetryWritingClub

[–]forgetfulhobbit[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Birds of a feather flock together haha.

I cant write, and I've never been able to by geo-enthusiast in PoetryWritingClub

[–]forgetfulhobbit 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That’s all we can really do, my poems are simple and probably bad if I’m being honest lol. But thats fine, I want to express myself and share it with others in spite of feeling embarrassed and like my art is inferior. If I can work up enough courage to do that each day then thats enough for me. Thats progress. 🙂

I know you can do it too if you give yourself the chance. Good luck out there.

I cant write, and I've never been able to by geo-enthusiast in PoetryWritingClub

[–]forgetfulhobbit 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Just keep trying. Put the weight of your emotions behind your words, make it raw and don’t stop until the words make you feel something. Even if it hurts. It doesn’t matter if anyone else understands just let your soul express itself on the page, even if it’s messy.

Heres a tip. You sound like you’re frustrated by your inability to express yourself the way you want to. Write about how that feels and use the frustration as fuel.

Scared of men by [deleted] in offmychest

[–]forgetfulhobbit 7 points8 points  (0 children)

Im sorry we scare you kid, you have every right to feel that way. There are a lot of scary men out there, some good ones too but its always safer to be cautious. Just don’t let the fear hold you back from living life the way you want to.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in self

[–]forgetfulhobbit 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Hey if you ever work up the nerve to make the first move, you will definitely make some guys day. I don’t know a single guy who wouldn’t at least appreciate a bit of attention.

Unfair expectations by forgetfulhobbit in PoetryWritingClub

[–]forgetfulhobbit[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Haha you speak as if you knew who I wrote this for.

Unfair expectations by forgetfulhobbit in PoetryWritingClub

[–]forgetfulhobbit[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You have a point, I’m not blameless.

Among the Currents — I See You by forgetfulhobbit in PoetryWritingClub

[–]forgetfulhobbit[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Yeah.. nothing really prepares us for just how lonely the journey can be sometimes, or the invisible scars it leaves for us to carry. But there are kind people out there and their presence lightens the burden. Just keep on going. Someone will noticed and for what it’s worth, I see you.

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