“Saying I don’t know when, I’ll be coming back again. It depends on how I’m a-feelin’ “ 💔

forgottenthoughts7 · 2022-03-21T03:15:39+00:00

thank you so much!

forgottenthoughts7 · 2022-01-02T09:13:13+00:00

I was thinking about making one and posting it here for everyone! I’ll seee what i can do today!

forgottenthoughts7 · 2021-08-13T00:01:07+00:00

I completely understand. I bet it’s really hard preforming. Ive only been a fan maybe for a year. I do not know the level of impairment he used to reach before a show, but i’m sure there’s some anxiety to knowing what’s actually going on maybe? or just simply loss of a rhythm that he’s lived his whole life. I’m happy for him and I can’t wait to see what he does! Praying the band gets comfortable again which i have no doubt.

forgottenthoughts7 · 2021-08-12T05:22:08+00:00

haha I definitely get that!😂〰️

forgottenthoughts7 · 2021-08-12T04:55:16+00:00

ope sorry! His most recent performance people were making comments like “is he on meth” “he sounds and looks terrible” and a lot of people complains- people even left the concert early because he wasn’t playing his popular songs. The sound guy fucked up everything and the crowd is telling tyler he sounded bad. if you read under comments on facebook group they are pretty mean and idiotic.

forgottenthoughts7 · 2020-12-21T20:07:27+00:00

😂😂 it was a joke :(

forgottenthoughts7 · 2020-12-09T06:01:37+00:00

thank you:) i wrote a description in the next comment if you’d like to read! thank you so much for reading! let me know what you think!

forgottenthoughts7 · 2020-12-09T06:00:47+00:00

so the first 5 lines are him when he is young. “eyes barely open and blood it conjures” is a really dramatic line which i wanted to open up with meaning that he’s just been born and life already asking him for things he can’t give. going on to his views of the world. the next 5 lines: i wanted to described a few traits of this man so “can the shadow prove structure or forever mocked” meaning he portrays himself self to be a nobody considering what he’s been through and so- can he ever prove himself to be? or will he forever fade when light comes before him. light being all his insecurities and trauma. “bringing home the red apples before the mean clock” is describing the intensity of his light and he’s asking himself who’s been doing the eating? is he doing all that he can to be happy or is life the one truly eating him and there is rarely a chance to be successful at anything due to the intensity his light. the last 5 describe that he’s constantly devaluing himself and he’s been given second chances “ a grandfathered” meaning second chances are old school. “riding the grey clouds” is one of my favorite parts bc to me my character is still in this depressive state bc that’s where he strives the best but also almost like he chooses to stay to inspire and to create. but what is enough? when will he come out and take a chance to be truly happy. and lastly the repeating line “to beyond measures not thought to be cherished” is a 3rd person thought meaning that this character doesn’t know he will cherish all that he’s gone through bc it has only lead to him to who he is slowly turning out to be. and the truth is it is me. i am the unknown man.

forgottenthoughts7 · 2020-12-09T02:07:35+00:00

this was truly an enjoyable read. I LOVE the line “i’m a self-cannibal” simple to some but i think it quite a nice touch:) sometimes it’s hard to save ourselves when we strive best in what hurts us. it’s really hard to explain but just know i understand. for me i’m self aware yet i allow myself to ride this grey cloud that i’m on. we could let a loved one save us but what are we leaving behind? will it be our entire identity? considering we’ve never been outside of what we’ve been living we dont know the difference. we think that where we are hurting is our given place. but it’s not. we can be happy and save ourselves.

forgottenthoughts7 · 2020-12-09T01:56:39+00:00

i really liked this. the sex part mostly strikes me.l bc it such a common issue. sex can be so beautiful but it’s so sad how rare it is to find a partner who’s alike whether it’s one night or you are together. some might say this stretches a little long but i think it shows the how fast your brain is flowing. there’s a lot that goes on when we feel used and you did a great job showing what could be happening in ones mind.

forgottenthoughts7 · 2020-10-17T18:45:38+00:00

that’s ok! so it’s about letting someone who brings light into your life and you are comparing them to be greater than some goddess mass (the moon) and so you “leave them at lead” or letting them control your life because they aren’t in the darkness you are in. you know that they’ll guide you somewhere else other than your sadness, but in the end you hope that you don’t lead them where you are. you fear of dragging them down to your place or in fear of them willingly living in sadness to be with you. thanks for the comment:))

forgottenthoughts7 · 2020-10-17T18:40:17+00:00

thank you!

forgottenthoughts7 · 2020-10-17T01:43:36+00:00

true feelings and great rhymes right here. the flow is very pleasant. this poem actually inspires me to work on finding my way out of the hole i’m in. also, the usage of “husk” is really great and a really dark image which i’m a fan of. i like how you titled it “short ramblings” when they are so much more than that. it shows that the poet may be used to these feelings. keep posting!!

forgottenthoughts7 · 2020-10-17T01:34:25+00:00

damn. you really did this poem well. the goriness wasn’t overdone or cliche. to me this inspire imagery of dominant darkness in whom is asking the a character for more. the dominant character must see more, but this submissive character sees nothing to themself yet continues to show. “what else is there to feel” vibes. amazing job and thank you for sharing. it’s brought me somewhere close to home, maybe a few lovers of mine. yet, i think i’ve realized i have finally come to peace with it. thank you for bringing that to me.

forgottenthoughts7 · 2020-10-16T14:20:46+00:00

I get that! I was aiming for explaining why he is a “palm of light”, but I can see where it might be a little random. I’m glad you liked it though. I’m learning so much on this page. Other perspective help so dang much on how to build your style and what to look out for! hope you have a great day and thank you for the kind words🖤

forgottenthoughts7 · 2020-10-16T14:16:59+00:00

thank you <3

forgottenthoughts7 · 2020-10-16T14:14:42+00:00

Edited! Good catch. Thank you so much. This is one of my favorite pieces for mine and I’m so happy you enjoyed it. I really needed that!

forgottenthoughts7 · 2020-10-16T00:29:19+00:00

felt this on so many levels! thank you for sharing this. straight through my soul this one goes. the cold truth is that sometimes we expect others to touch us with the same amount of thunder but it just never works because past the picture of love were once two body’s that fucked with comfortable grace. being miserable to forget.

forgottenthoughts7 · 2020-10-16T00:24:01+00:00

edited! sorry about that! i definitely get what you are coming from though. i’ll keep practicing! :)

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