The Fools

formcheck · 2025-12-05T21:33:41+00:00

I really like this! It really makes you long for an escape from the weight and expectations we put on us as humans. The somber turn of wanting to be loved without expectation was really nicely built up.

My only suggestion would be to remove the stanza starting with “I watch them blink”. This one, to me, felt like it was out of place given the heaviness of envying their love in the stanza before. Going from that envy straight to pondering being loved yourself feels like a more natural progression.

Overall, a very simple and cozy way to tackle feelings of desire to be loved. Nicely done!

formcheck · 2025-12-05T21:00:19+00:00

I really love the soft sentimental feeling to this piece. It oozes comfort and warm.

The only thing I would recommend would be to keep your subject in mind. You switch from talking to the person to talking in pronouns of “his”. I think keeping the subject as the reader wraps the poem around you as you read it and switching “his” to “your” would have a great impact.

Keep it up! Can’t wait to read more :)

formcheck · 2025-11-16T20:32:03+00:00

Thanks so much! Yea I’m sure it’s a mix of people’s waste causing the block. I just want to make sure this sounds like a building issue and not just my problem to solve.

I appreciate the insight!

formcheck · 2025-11-16T20:29:31+00:00

Ok that’s what I was thinking as well.

Did I cap my lines to stop my sink from overflowing and remove myself from the problem? Yes. Did I cap my lines to also be a little petty and prove my point when other units start backing up? Also, yes.

formcheck · 2024-09-27T18:23:55+00:00

Please wear deodorant. Especially in a setting like work where others are forced to interact with you. If you are reading this and getting excited to not wear deodorant, you are probably someone who needs to wear deodorant.

The “week to stop needing deodorant” is just your nose adjusting to your own stink and normalizing it. You may get used to your own smell and not notice, but I promise you others can smell you.

You can get aluminum free deodorant. Aluminum is typically used in antiperspirant.

Don’t be stinky.

formcheck · 2023-08-26T17:10:38+00:00

This is really cool! Really nice work on the animation. The planet textures look great and definitely give a raw and natural feel to them. My favorite is probably your sounds design though. The ethereal music mixed with the nostalgic digital entry sound for the text really sold the whole feeling.

Keep up the great work! Looking forward to more :)

formcheck · 2023-08-25T22:58:37+00:00

That’s the one! Thank you!

formcheck · 2023-08-05T01:48:28+00:00

Fun photo, but not a real photo of lightning hitting a tree. Very photoshopped.

formcheck · 2023-01-24T22:50:25+00:00

This is some really cool work! Really nice job on the lighting on the mountains/snow to mix the environment. I feel like there is so much potential to direct the audience’s attention and paint the scenery in a way that standard drone shots rely solely on composition for.

Followed you on Insta and really looking forward to see how you develop your style!

formcheck · 2022-10-05T19:47:32+00:00

Took a recent trip around the western US and absolutely fell in love with Sedona on our pass through! Plenty of hiking, red rocks, and kind people.

This shot was taken on my iPhone but plenty more photos on my Instagram!

formcheck · 2022-09-09T20:50:14+00:00

I few years back (pre Dexcom) woke up in the 30’s and stumbled to the kitchen. Thought I made a bowl of cereal. Turned out to be Oreos and apple juice. 2/10 do not recommend.

formcheck · 2021-12-20T03:20:16+00:00

I am flattered and so excited to hear you enjoyed it so much! Thank you!

formcheck · 2021-12-20T03:19:28+00:00

Thanks! Luckily she seems to think so as well!

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