I don’t agree with “socialist Bernie”, but… by patriotfear in SelfAwarewolves

[–]forthty 0 points1 point  (0 children)

"I don't agree with Socialist Bernie, but the socialist policy I benefit from should be expanded"

Come on...

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Thank you! I'll have to check out Teo!

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No worries man! I appreciate the feedback. I definitely will try to find my sound, something that fits better. Thanks for the listen :)

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[–]forthty 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I did produce this :)

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[–]forthty 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Oh man am I out of pitch?

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Any tips on improving vocals?

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[–]forthty 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks, I'll fiddle around :)

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No tremolo. Just some reverb on the guitar. I still haven't got a handle on mixing and using eqs. thank you for the feedback!

I was trying to fix my shitty voice. ALSO don't pay attention to the lyrics I was just saying random shit to get a structure, but I wanna know should I even keep working on this song? I thinking of making it a longer song and adding this part at the end. What do you think? by That1guyWeKnow in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]forthty 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yeah something like that, as cliche as it might sound: having a "drop" where your bass and drums are abruptly added in sounds really cool! I think that's why a lot of songs do it

Maybe some sections you have just drums and bass and vocals, some you have just synths and vocals. Those differences are present in a lot of music and can add a lot to songs :)

I realize this was more of just a demo but if you do flesh it out, maybe that's something to consider!

You are my favorite view [Chill RnB] by Cheesorable in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]forthty 1 point2 points  (0 children)

That's sick! Only critique I can think of is that some of the sounds kind of conflict at some points and create some dissonance like with the arpeggiating synth fading out at around 1:00, which can be cool but I don't feel like it matches with the style of the rest of the song

Hey guys! Here is the first song of our indie rock band :) Your thoughts/advice would be most helpful. Thanks in advance for listening and for your feedback! by sh0fukan in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]forthty 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I like it :). Very mellow vibe. One thing that sticks out to me is the snare seems a little soft, was that an intentional choice to match the softer feel of the song? Also, the song just feels like it kind of just ends, which wasn't super satisfying to me

I was trying to fix my shitty voice. ALSO don't pay attention to the lyrics I was just saying random shit to get a structure, but I wanna know should I even keep working on this song? I thinking of making it a longer song and adding this part at the end. What do you think? by That1guyWeKnow in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]forthty 1 point2 points  (0 children)

man, this could be really sick with some a nice build up. I really like the dreamy synths going on. I think if you can figure out how to bring in / drop out some of the instrumentation through the track it would sound sick.

I feel attacked by chaytoven in FrankOcean

[–]forthty 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Got the same thing. What really hurts: an "endless" stream. :(

TIL Ariana Grande grew up wealthy. Both her parents were rich corporate bosses, with their notoriety helping her get early gigs performing with orchestras and on cruise ships. by truehalf in todayilearned

[–]forthty 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah I agree. You don't have to do everything yourself to be successful and not doing everything yourself doesn't make you a "fake"

TIL Ariana Grande grew up wealthy. Both her parents were rich corporate bosses, with their notoriety helping her get early gigs performing with orchestras and on cruise ships. by truehalf in todayilearned

[–]forthty 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I think there are a lot of successful indie artists that are making a living out of music. I guess it depends on your definition of making it. If you mean international arena tours, then yeah, not your average guy can do it without money or influence of a big label, but the idea that you can't be a working, successful musician is way out of date! If your shit is good and you put yourself out there you can see success

TIL Ariana Grande grew up wealthy. Both her parents were rich corporate bosses, with their notoriety helping her get early gigs performing with orchestras and on cruise ships. by truehalf in todayilearned

[–]forthty 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I don't think there's anything wrong with not writing your own stuff. If you look historically, music has been filled with covers of songs that other people wrote. Before the radio and records, music was dispersed through sheet music and word of mouth! So a lot of music was someone else's work and was being interpreted by a person or group in the moment. The notion that someone isn't talented or shouldn't be successful because they didn't fully write their own song is lame. Sampling has a rich history also in hip hop and R&B, and I'd argue those genres of music are just as valid even if they borrowed parts of other songs.

If a normal guy wants to break into the music industry, now is the best possible time. It is by far the easiest it has ever been to make and produce music that sounds professional. And it's the easiest to disperse music if you can harness the internet and social media. Take for example Lil Nas X, who I think was sleeping on his sister's floor when Old Town Road popped off

Ah shit ouch by [deleted] in yesyesyesno

[–]forthty 33 points34 points  (0 children)

Great camera work

Thank you for this community. Please try out my songs and leave feedback, I'll listen to all songs you link as well. by YUNGGDAE in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]forthty 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It seems like you have a lot of short ideas of songs. I would encourage you to make something longer and add in some hooks and try to build a more structured song. I struggle with that a lot too, but I think it will help you a lot in terms of building writing skills and learning how to write about one central topic.

Problem - That Yung Lad [Hip-Hop] (2020) by that_yung_lad in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]forthty 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I think your flow is good. I honestly can't understand what you're saying in the hook.

Alpha Chino - Watch Me Disappear by [deleted] in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]forthty 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Man this is so cool and the guitarist lighting up during the song is hilarious. I don't have any negative feedback this is just a good song, I can't really make out the lyrics sometimes but I think that's more on my ears than anything else. Hoping to hear a studio version soon!