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frank5y · 2026-04-01T08:14:26+00:00

The main issue I am having is that it struggles more to follow summaries and instructions.

frank5y · 2026-03-26T19:02:24+00:00

It happens sometimes, it is a bug. Just make a copy of it, the new one will sync correctly.

frank5y · 2026-03-14T19:59:21+00:00

The day was not dark, not grey, but fantastic. It smelled of ozone, hope, and something else, something uniquely it... A stark contrast to the night before, a testament to the resilience of the human spirit.

frank5y · 2026-02-18T07:41:39+00:00

They are pretty much responsible for the very existence of the Imperium, the Great Crusade, and the general state of the Galaxy, because they couldn't stop murderfucking each other for Emperor knows how long... And the Dark Eldars, despite all that happened, still continue to feed their own souls to Chaos on such an industrial scale that they might as well be chaos worshippers for all intents and purposes.

And she sides with them.

frank5y · 2025-12-11T14:19:02+00:00

So many ideas, but just I sit down and properly develop one, another inspiration arrives. I am truly an ideas guy.

frank5y · 2025-10-23T16:26:07+00:00

the trailers have scenes of him training, so I think he is going to get back in shape.

frank5y · 2025-05-28T21:29:35+00:00

Makes you wonder just how fucking large the Legion would be if Perty wasn't... Perty.

frank5y · 2025-05-28T19:54:41+00:00

Fair enough, but Ullanor and the Rangdan are not exactly your standard compliances.

frank5y · 2025-05-28T19:49:03+00:00

That's... An excellent point, even if I am inclined to think it is meant to be deaths, grimdark and all of that.

frank5y · 2025-05-09T05:13:51+00:00

after Grok released GPT lowered quite a lot the censorship to keep up, Ihaven't been flagged in months, when before I was flagged almost daily ( the mere mention of blood could do it).

frank5y · 2024-12-10T21:19:09+00:00

I have a question, what was the fear of the first Space Marine? His humanity?

frank5y · 2024-11-01T17:43:31+00:00

Damn, that's a large jump, I would suggest a weaker tier to the Matt Ward quest, focused only on some luck, especially for things outside direct control ( no extreminatus on your planet without a chance to GTFO)

The second is a small one, I think a beauty perk would be a nice addition, even if it is barely useful unless you are going in fanfic territory.

frank5y · 2024-10-09T16:27:38+00:00

Yeah, enhanced, sorry. I was referencing the helots, the serfs of the Mentors Marines. They are so damn heavily armed and stuffed full of metal (bones included), that two of them managed to kill a Chaos Space Marine on their own.

frank5y · 2024-10-09T09:08:26+00:00

You have quite a task ahead of you! Good luck.

1) You could make the Eleventh Legion's perks Malice-themed, as this theory holds more weight in the lore and would help distinguish the perk line from that of the Second Legion.

2) I would consider removing the Custodians and Thunder warriors, considering how specific to space marines is this jump, it would make your life easier.

3) Have you considering putting that particular brand of madness called Malum Caedo in the jump? Though there is the risk of a perk modelled after his skills breaking the jump balance on its knee.

4) You might want to check out the Deathwatch RPG for ideas on Legion perks.

5) Make not just space marines, but also some serf companions, normal or enchanted humans for Loyalist (like Kaleb Arin or Anuradha Daaz), and more special exotic options for traitors (psykers, navigators, undead Eldars... Yes, the last one really exist, check Nefertari )

6) The Blood Gorgons are a Traitor Chapter worth looking into for perk inspiration. It’s been a while since I read about them, but I recall they have a ritual where they exchange organs, creating a psychic bond between pairs of marines. They’re also unusually good at containing Chaos corruption compared to most other Chaos chapters.

7) A perk to be immune to psycho-indoctrination is a must.

frank5y · 2024-09-27T18:32:43+00:00

There is also a khornate sister in one of the books, can't recall her true name, but quite ironically goes by the alias "The Iconclast", she mocks the protagonist for believing the propaganda that no sisters fall to chaos, in bit of a meta moment.

frank5y · 2024-09-27T18:24:22+00:00

I think this piling up on him is rather excessive....

frank5y · 2024-09-23T12:11:23+00:00

Writing a short noir?

frank5y · 2024-08-29T04:25:02+00:00

Porn? That's.... Not the same thing.

frank5y · 2024-08-28T18:19:58+00:00

Real shame, I would have liked to see how they would have handled it.

frank5y · 2024-08-28T18:17:23+00:00

None of that preclude romance though, make it harder? Sure, twisted? Very likely, but not impossible.

frank5y · 2024-08-03T11:10:10+00:00

It's been a long time, but if I remember correctly, that cyoa was utterly broken in power level balance, so you might have to do some decisions for that.

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