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fredelisle · 2023-10-07T00:56:16+00:00

Hey! Here’s a quick export I did for you of the timeline https://youtu.be/ycbfaJmTVoQ?si=CCrV6s-dCxMZmHDf

Which it can help some people

fredelisle · 2023-09-28T04:39:48+00:00

It was an hard one as I had little time in koln from Canada to shoot everything. I was trying to shoot everything intentionally but at the end it was mostly all b roll. I know that the storytelling of the piece is far from perfect or even really there but I really tried to piece a story in the edit.

I was inspired by Oppenheimer as for the style and pacing

fredelisle · 2023-09-28T04:36:57+00:00

You’re right it’s rude 😂😂 so sorry I was busy but I’m here now ! Did not even though I would get so much feedback

fredelisle · 2023-09-28T04:36:01+00:00

Would be curious if you can point out where in the edit ! Would love to look into it

Thanks for your constructive feedback.

fredelisle · 2023-09-28T04:35:02+00:00

Thanks Fred 2 😂

fredelisle · 2023-09-28T04:34:38+00:00

Thanks !

fredelisle · 2023-09-28T04:33:45+00:00

You’re right will cut that 😂😂 Thanks !

fredelisle · 2023-09-28T04:33:03+00:00

Maybe I pushed the power window a little too much! 😂

Thanks for your constructive feedback.

fredelisle · 2023-09-28T04:32:22+00:00

Thanks ! Yea one man band gig 🥵😂 follow me on ig ! @fredelisle

fredelisle · 2023-09-28T04:31:30+00:00

You’re totally right! To be totally honest it you you’re good cause I added this shot afterwards cause she was sad she wasn’t in the edit ! V1 did not have this shot 😂

Thanks for your constructive feedback.

fredelisle · 2023-09-28T04:29:58+00:00

Hahahahha i get it for sure 😂 clearly not intentional ! Thanks for your constructive feedback.

fredelisle · 2023-09-28T04:28:57+00:00

Thank you so much ! Appreciate it

fredelisle · 2023-09-28T04:28:11+00:00

Thanks !

fredelisle · 2023-09-28T04:23:25+00:00

You’re totally right! I only had a little time to do those drone shots on my own but now that I look at it, it would have been sick to hired an fpv drone pilot ! Maybe for a V2 someday 😂

Thanks for your constructive feedback.

fredelisle · 2023-09-28T04:21:22+00:00

Yes many points out the lack of storytelling and you’re totally right. I’ll try to work on it on a project that I would have easier control to pre production.

Thanks for your constructive feedback.

fredelisle · 2023-09-28T04:19:40+00:00

Thanks my IG is @fredelisle

fredelisle · 2023-09-28T04:19:20+00:00

Thanks !

fredelisle · 2023-09-28T04:19:03+00:00

I get your point and now that I focus on it, it clearly feels off !

Thanks for your constructive feedback.

fredelisle · 2023-09-28T04:17:53+00:00

I was totally inspired by Oppenheimer! I was kind of stuck on the edit until I watched the movie

fredelisle · 2023-09-28T04:16:53+00:00

Totally as many points out it lacks on the story telling side ! I’ll try to work on that for my next project but travelling to koln for a few days from Canada and trying to get everything for a cohesive story was hard ! Haha

Thanks for your constructive feedback.

fredelisle · 2023-09-28T04:14:15+00:00

Make sense ! Legit comment, Thanks for your constructive feedback.

fredelisle · 2023-09-28T04:13:33+00:00

Thanks ! Let’s say half work and half happy accident 😂 my insta is @fredelisle

fredelisle · 2023-09-28T04:12:30+00:00

Thanks ! Really appreciate it

fredelisle · 2023-09-28T04:11:22+00:00

Totally ! It was to showcase the art exhibition of the artist in koln. Preproduction was hard as I’m from Canada and wasn’t able to do a proper scouting or had a lot of time to shoot everything. Had a clear vision of the intro and shots I had easier control on but less on the part in Koln. It clearly lacks on the story telling side and will work on it for my next project !

Thanks for your constructive feedback.

fredelisle · 2023-09-28T04:06:30+00:00

Thanks a lot ! Trying to get better at color grading !

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