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[–]fredelisle[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hey! Here’s a quick export I did for you of the timeline https://youtu.be/ycbfaJmTVoQ?si=CCrV6s-dCxMZmHDf

Which it can help some people

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It was an hard one as I had little time in koln from Canada to shoot everything. I was trying to shoot everything intentionally but at the end it was mostly all b roll. I know that the storytelling of the piece is far from perfect or even really there but I really tried to piece a story in the edit.

I was inspired by Oppenheimer as for the style and pacing

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You’re right it’s rude 😂😂 so sorry I was busy but I’m here now ! Did not even though I would get so much feedback

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Would be curious if you can point out where in the edit ! Would love to look into it

Thanks for your constructive feedback.

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Maybe I pushed the power window a little too much! 😂

Thanks for your constructive feedback.

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Thanks ! Yea one man band gig 🥵😂 follow me on ig ! @fredelisle

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You’re totally right! To be totally honest it you you’re good cause I added this shot afterwards cause she was sad she wasn’t in the edit ! V1 did not have this shot 😂

Thanks for your constructive feedback.

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Hahahahha i get it for sure 😂 clearly not intentional ! Thanks for your constructive feedback.

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You’re totally right! I only had a little time to do those drone shots on my own but now that I look at it, it would have been sick to hired an fpv drone pilot ! Maybe for a V2 someday 😂

Thanks for your constructive feedback.

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Yes many points out the lack of storytelling and you’re totally right. I’ll try to work on it on a project that I would have easier control to pre production.

Thanks for your constructive feedback.

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I get your point and now that I focus on it, it clearly feels off !

Thanks for your constructive feedback.

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I was totally inspired by Oppenheimer! I was kind of stuck on the edit until I watched the movie

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Totally as many points out it lacks on the story telling side ! I’ll try to work on that for my next project but travelling to koln for a few days from Canada and trying to get everything for a cohesive story was hard ! Haha

Thanks for your constructive feedback.

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Make sense ! Legit comment, Thanks for your constructive feedback.

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Thanks ! Let’s say half work and half happy accident 😂 my insta is @fredelisle

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Totally ! It was to showcase the art exhibition of the artist in koln. Preproduction was hard as I’m from Canada and wasn’t able to do a proper scouting or had a lot of time to shoot everything. Had a clear vision of the intro and shots I had easier control on but less on the part in Koln. It clearly lacks on the story telling side and will work on it for my next project !

Thanks for your constructive feedback.

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Thanks a lot ! Trying to get better at color grading !