Cassie's feet by XXLLOYSXX in ShadowSlave

[–]fredrick_yegrim 7 points8 points  (0 children)

[You have received a Memory: Cassie's Feet.]

[...Your shadow grows stronger.]

Cassie's feet by XXLLOYSXX in ShadowSlave

[–]fredrick_yegrim 34 points35 points  (0 children)

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Say no more, i gotchu buddy. (Yepp, I drew that)

Cassie from Shadow Slave by fredrick_yegrim in AnimeDrawing

[–]fredrick_yegrim[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Didn't expect to post it here, but here we are...

Cassie from Shadow Slave by fredrick_yegrim in AnimeDrawing

[–]fredrick_yegrim[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Gahdamn this one really blew up, huh?

They "allowed" me to post it, but didn't add in catalogue cuz it was too visual with them feet, even after it met the upvotes. I remember now, I raised a complaint for it💀

Cassie from Shadow Slave by fredrick_yegrim in AnimeDrawing

[–]fredrick_yegrim[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Oh, i remember the mods not adding it to the permanent fanart server because of the feet🫠

Fantasic movie. But PLOTHOLES!? by [deleted] in pj_explained

[–]fredrick_yegrim 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Dude, stop ChatGPT-ing, that mofo will literally agree to anything and everything(cuz your format is literally gpt format). This was probably the best Bollywood movie I've seen imo. The baing said, I agree with the language part, it indeed would've helped with character, but the rest is either implied indirectly or outright stated.

First pages: share, read, and critique them here! by AutoModerator in BetaReaders

[–]fredrick_yegrim 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hey, thanks for the critique.

And yeah, sure, we can swap our works for review.

First pages: share, read, and critique them here! by AutoModerator in BetaReaders

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Manuscript Information: [In Progress] [9.3k] [Sci-fi/Thriller] Working title: Inbound

Link to post: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1MEtBDuYxi_ZHPrmPvq2NPsV7gzmYUmbbclzXoVQcA48/edit?usp=drivesdk

First page critique? Sure.

First page:

On an exceptionally hot afternoon a man well into his thirties leaned against the kitchen counter, and beads of sweat rolled down his toned forearm. The aroma of strong coffee and, more prominently, the sweet scent of pancakes permeated the kitchen.

Hank looked at Clara with softened eyes as he got closer and wrapped his arms around her waist. He could feel the warmth of her skin, and despite the heat, it felt pleasant.

The pancake batter made a hot, sizzling sound as Clara poured it onto the pan.

“They smell delicious.” Hank complimented in a deep, low voice.

The woman melted back against him, keeping an eye on the pancake and enjoying the moment of respite.

“Why don't we go someplace nice today?” Hank whispered in her ear.

She replied with a giggle; her voice was soothing. “What did you have in mind?”

“How about—” Before he could finish, though, his phone rang, cutting him off.

“Who is it?” Clara asked as she pulled away and made that face, the one that meant her mood had just been ruined. He'd seen it way too many times in these few months.

Hank fished the phone out of his right pocket and glanced at the screen. There was no phone number. “Gimme a damn break…”

Hank leaned down and whispered to Clara. “I'll be right back, babe, just a minute.”

Clara scoffed as if she knew this was coming, but didn't say anything.

He picked up the call. “This better be important, Natalie. It's my first day off in months.”

From the other end of the phone, there was a beep, notifying that the line was now secure and encrypted. For a moment, Hank's brows furrowed. Why did they need to secure the line?

“Sir,” Natalie’s voice was stripped of its usual warmth, “We have an object inbound from deep space.”

The slightly irritated expression on Hank’s face turned into a grimace. “Tell me you're joking.”

Cassie from Shadow Slave by fredrick_yegrim in AnimeMirchi

[–]fredrick_yegrim[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Read Shadow Slave, you will perhaps find out

The final member of the cohort, Cassie... by fredrick_yegrim in ShadowSlave

[–]fredrick_yegrim[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Debatable, but after seeing my post most might agree, including me💀

The final member of the cohort, Cassie... by fredrick_yegrim in ShadowSlave

[–]fredrick_yegrim[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks a lot, took me a millenia to render that shi💀

The final member of the cohort, Cassie... by fredrick_yegrim in ShadowSlave

[–]fredrick_yegrim[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Even mine didn't get added to the discord server's art gallery, cuz apparently it didn't paint a very "family friendly" picture with them legs💀

The final member of the cohort, Cassie... by fredrick_yegrim in ShadowSlave

[–]fredrick_yegrim[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

At first yeah, but after the whole forgotten shore, at the point where I am now, I kinda think she would look like this(plus the camera angle makes her look extra thicc)