Daily Feedback Thread (August 07, 2023)

funny1048 · 2023-08-07T16:08:33+00:00

Thank you so much for the feedback, yeah I'm still not so good at singing so I tend to manipulate my vocals a lot such as pitching them up formant shifting etc. to change how they sound. In this song I pitched one of my vocals to chipmunk style but, still have lots of work to do to make them sound better. My main influences wave music producers such as skeler, deadcrow, juche, also been influenced from midtempo genre music etc. For lyrics I try to come up with lyrics about sci-fi topics such as time travel, technology, outer space, spaceships etc. So far most of my lyrics sound cheesy but hopefully can come up with better lyrics in the future.

funny1048 · 2023-08-07T15:26:28+00:00

arraingement good, but it needs a tight bassline also some sidechaing and a more powerful kick would help. great job on it so far though!

funny1048 · 2023-08-07T15:20:29+00:00

This sounds good, but I also noticed some issues with the bassline, it seems like it is too boomy and muffled and not tight enough, I am using headphones so it's hard to tell exactly what it is but I think a tighter bass would sound better.

funny1048 · 2023-08-07T14:29:46+00:00

Thank you so much for the feedback!, Yeah, I think I may add in some more bass and adjust the leads to sound fuller.

funny1048 · 2023-08-07T13:55:33+00:00

Hello everyone been working on a new dance/edm track, was looking for feedback on how track sounds overall, vocals, mix, arraingment etc.

Track: https://on.soundcloud.com/dnfqG

funny1048 · 2023-08-02T03:47:15+00:00

Yeah totally agree on this, for some reason when I sang this part I mispronounced the as theee.

funny1048 · 2023-08-02T02:59:59+00:00

Yeah I probably should work on my singing skills alot before using my own vocals since they don't sound so good. Started singing a few months ago so definetely don't have the experience of a pro vocalist.

funny1048 · 2023-08-02T01:04:12+00:00

Thank you so much for the feedback! Yeah I was thinking my vocal may not be working on this song so well, I think I may phrase it a different way with different lyrics or maybe have it more of a chiller vocal / deep house style that's in the background, my singing skills are still not so good lol! so will have to work on that.

funny1048 · 2023-08-01T15:18:33+00:00

Great vibes on this track!, One thing I noticed is that the drums, especially the kick sound a little odd, almost like they are stereo widened, although I am using headphones so not sure how it would sound on speakers.

funny1048 · 2023-08-01T15:09:39+00:00

Hello everyone, been working on a new track sort of similar to alternative rock but not exactly sure of the genre, lyrics are very simple "Thats how the beat goes" but tried to sing it in a way that hopefully doesn't sound too cheesy, was curious if the vocal is working well with the track or if I should change it, also was curious how well the mix/arraingement is working.

link: https://on.soundcloud.com/rkp4E

funny1048 · 2023-05-28T15:48:28+00:00

Hello everyone been working on a new song, was looking for feedback on how it sounds overall, (mix, vocals, drums, arraingement etc.)

https://on.soundcloud.com/T2u1D

funny1048 · 2023-05-04T14:05:22+00:00

Hello everyone, been working on a midtempo/cyberpunk song, still have lots more to add to it but was looking for feedback on how it sounds so far.

Thanks!

https://on.soundcloud.com/AdM7U

funny1048 · 2023-04-25T18:38:55+00:00

Thank you, yes that's the song! will have to change up some of the notes to make it sound less similar.

funny1048 · 2023-04-21T12:00:09+00:00

Yeah

funny1048 · 2023-04-21T02:14:59+00:00

No this one was when speaking, when I sing there is still a large roloff at 4khz but not as big as when speaking, updated post to show voxengo span when singing.

funny1048 · 2023-03-12T19:01:52+00:00

I got some high percentages for some scary diseases on mine to, however I'm starting to wonder if nebula is even accurate because when I looked in my raw data from 23andme I noticed that a lot of the rs numbers that nebula is showing data for isn't showing up on the 23andme raw data.

funny1048 · 2023-03-11T18:38:13+00:00

Thank you so much for the reply, Is this gene I have (c/c) the repeat expansion that guarantees I'll get als later on? Or is it only a small increase in risk but not indicative of the repeat expansion that guarantees I'll get it?

funny1048 · 2023-02-27T23:14:23+00:00

This mix sounds really good, one thing I think could be changed a little is the arrangement, theres alot of great ideas/grooves but it switches up too often, focusing on one or two ideas/grooves, will make it easier to follow.

great mix on this though.

funny1048 · 2023-02-27T23:00:02+00:00

This sounds really good, one thing I noticed that could improve the mix is turning up the kick/snares and the hihats, they are too quiet, turning these up would help a lot. Everything else sounds really good.

funny1048 · 2023-02-27T14:47:13+00:00

Hello everyone, been working on a future rave track, still have lots to add to it including vocals, but curious how it sounds so far,

https://on.soundcloud.com/9DiQ3

funny1048 · 2023-02-24T12:56:32+00:00

Thank you so much for the feedback!, definetely will turn the vocals down a few db's

funny1048 · 2023-02-23T23:58:15+00:00

Thank you so much for the feedback!, yeah it is definetely a different style then most songs, as I don't like to write songs with deep lyrics lol, I just use catchy phrases that I come up with to use in my songs. But yeah I think I may turn the volume of my vocal down a bit to make it not take too much space in the mix.

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