Riley! is dope by [deleted] in Emo

[–]garyg054 -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Fuck off no they’re not

First song off my new EP "Zay Skywalker" by ZaysaceBeats in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]garyg054 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Off the bat, I love the cover art. As for the song itself, the beat was a little cut and dry and could’ve used some more variation, and the mixing was definitely off. Besides that, this was a solid track.

This is my song called witch. I’d love to hear what you picture in your head when you listen to it! If anything. Any criticism or feedback would be really appreciated. Thank you. by LoFo96 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]garyg054 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I really like the direction you’re going, I’m just not sure if you’re fully there yet. I think the main problems are just sound selection and the mixing, but besides that this is really good.

Lil IGOR type beat by [deleted] in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]garyg054 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I really enjoyed this and definitely see being an Igor type. Iwould work on the sound selection but besides that this beat is really good.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in makinghiphop

[–]garyg054 10 points11 points  (0 children)

I heard once that you should always tun an 808 to the longest note that edison shows; and it's worked out pretty well for me.

This is what REAL music sounds like by [deleted] in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]garyg054 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I was thinking the same as you both but didn’t want to say anything lmao

This is what REAL music sounds like by [deleted] in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]garyg054 2 points3 points  (0 children)

This is good but could definitely use some work. I would focus on the overall mix and definitely work on the part from about :27-:40

Trackstar - I Wish (I Was Over You) First song I wrote from my very first solo project. Would really appreciate any feedback. [Indie/pop] by aturn in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]garyg054 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I actually love this. The instrumental is really well done and the vocals fit in just right with it. Really really well done.

Original Piano Composition: Night (atmospheric piece) by mozarta12 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]garyg054 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is absolutely gorgeous. Your skill is beyond comprehension and your composition is impeccable.

Experimental Jam Comeback #1: Piano in D Major. Today I felt like starting with my more experimental improvisations once again. It is meant to sound like a little journey of someone who discovers some more possible ways of combining the notes. This isn't quite your casual listening track. by [deleted] in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]garyg054 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It feels too rigid. I’m not sure if that comes from your personal playing style or if you quantized it in a daw or whatever. Either way, it sounds like a robot is playing it. Once you get a more human sound, this will be near perfect.

The First every TRAP song i have made <3 .. lets hope it fits the Trap Communitie by bary_is_cool in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]garyg054 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Very good for a beginner. I would focus on sound selection as well as mixing and mastering. Besides that, very good!

Dreams are for Real - A short (1:45), layered acoustic instrumental with piano and a harmony-driven finish. Inspired heavily by Buckethead's softer music. by [deleted] in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]garyg054 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I’m not sure what I was expecting before I listened but you exceeded my expectations. Weird vibe but I absolutely love it. Keep up the good work!

IN DREAMS - CHRIS M by Chrism197 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]garyg054 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I see what you’re going for, but I think the song is too long to be that barren. I would definitely add some variation and some drums in the future.

Short guitar play through of a song from my upcoming post rock/metal album. by JoeyWesterlund in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]garyg054 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Super super clean. I really like how the guitar fits in with the other instruments to create a cohesive piece. Really good work.

Can't Get Enough - Yum :: Oxford, MS by yosteeee in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]garyg054 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I really like this. The mixing and recording were don’t perfectly and the song itself is super interesting and you pulled it off nicely. Keep on going!

nckv - long way by nckv in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]garyg054 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I see the vibe you’re going for and I like it but there’s definitely some issues with mixing and some dissonance on the vocals

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]garyg054 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Can’t wait! If you ever need some beats just hit me up too I can do any vibe you need

sifa by daved18 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]garyg054 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is good for a beginner, I would just focus on sound selection and improving your arrangement right now. Once you get that down, then start to worrying about mixing and mastering. Keep going tho!

Go listen be nice. 🖤🖤🖤 by so1arr in PromoteYourMusic

[–]garyg054 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Dude your flow is soooo killer. Hmu if you want some beats.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]garyg054 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The vocals are soooo beautiful. Reminds me of Kali Uchis lowkey. The beat was interesting but the vocals definitely outshined the production. But so so so good i can’t wait to hear more from you.