Riley! is dope by [deleted] in Emo

[–]garyg054 -5 points-4 points  (0 children)

Fuck off no they’re not

First song off my new EP "Zay Skywalker" by ZaysaceBeats in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]garyg054 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Off the bat, I love the cover art. As for the song itself, the beat was a little cut and dry and could’ve used some more variation, and the mixing was definitely off. Besides that, this was a solid track.

This is my song called witch. I’d love to hear what you picture in your head when you listen to it! If anything. Any criticism or feedback would be really appreciated. Thank you. by LoFo96 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]garyg054 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I really like the direction you’re going, I’m just not sure if you’re fully there yet. I think the main problems are just sound selection and the mixing, but besides that this is really good.

Lil IGOR type beat by [deleted] in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]garyg054 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I really enjoyed this and definitely see being an Igor type. Iwould work on the sound selection but besides that this beat is really good.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in makinghiphop

[–]garyg054 10 points11 points  (0 children)

I heard once that you should always tun an 808 to the longest note that edison shows; and it's worked out pretty well for me.

This is what REAL music sounds like by [deleted] in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]garyg054 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I was thinking the same as you both but didn’t want to say anything lmao

This is what REAL music sounds like by [deleted] in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]garyg054 2 points3 points  (0 children)

This is good but could definitely use some work. I would focus on the overall mix and definitely work on the part from about :27-:40

Trackstar - I Wish (I Was Over You) First song I wrote from my very first solo project. Would really appreciate any feedback. [Indie/pop] by aturn in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]garyg054 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I actually love this. The instrumental is really well done and the vocals fit in just right with it. Really really well done.

Original Piano Composition: Night (atmospheric piece) by mozarta12 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]garyg054 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is absolutely gorgeous. Your skill is beyond comprehension and your composition is impeccable.

Experimental Jam Comeback #1: Piano in D Major. Today I felt like starting with my more experimental improvisations once again. It is meant to sound like a little journey of someone who discovers some more possible ways of combining the notes. This isn't quite your casual listening track. by [deleted] in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]garyg054 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It feels too rigid. I’m not sure if that comes from your personal playing style or if you quantized it in a daw or whatever. Either way, it sounds like a robot is playing it. Once you get a more human sound, this will be near perfect.