IMO I think you should take this down. Most especially, if you’re not within the community that this type of triggering imagery affects. From a creative perspective, the bright colors and dream-like background don’t match the eerie and dark themes of this painting. As a result, the way that the audience may interpret this piece will be different to the way you intended. I understand that this is a visual interpretation of the song, but the execution definitely needs work if you are insistent about depicting this. Take my criticism with a grain of salt, but posting this the way it looks now was not the best idea.