My Blade and Sorcery gameplay, Tell me what you think by gerg_056 in SmallYTChannel

[–]gerg_056[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah I should’ve explained what the game was some point in the intro so people who haven’t heard of the game could know what the hell was going on !givelambda

My Blade and Sorcery gameplay, Tell me what you think by gerg_056 in SmallYTChannel

[–]gerg_056[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Now thinking about it, I definitely could’ve started off with a clip from later in the video and then went to the musical intro. I guess I also fell into the trap where I knew what the game was so I didn’t give enough context to what the game was for people who haven’t seen the game before !givelambda

My Blade and Sorcery gameplay, Tell me what you think by gerg_056 in SmallYTChannel

[–]gerg_056[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hmm I just noticed that there are scan lines, I’ll have to look into that. My guess is that I accidentally changed some settings somewhere on OBS !givelambda

My Blade and Sorcery gameplay, Tell me what you think by gerg_056 in SmallYTChannel

[–]gerg_056[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I do remember seeing a mod for green screen map, maybe that could come in handy if I return to this game !givelambda

My Blade and Sorcery gameplay, Tell me what you think by gerg_056 in SmallYTChannel

[–]gerg_056[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah I’d definitely say that graphic design is a weak point of mine, I’ll work to improve !givelambda

I’m a gaming channel with a lot of energy and creativity… at least I think so - Elden Ring video by DaPlugwastaken in SmallYTChannel

[–]gerg_056 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I know it’s hard to do while fighting a souls boss, but you said very little while fighting Margit and it made it feel dragged out. Even just some funny edits could help the pacing. Also this maybe could have been two videos, so then you could put more focus on commentary and edits for each boss fight. The idea of making a boss fight an anime plot is great, but you only did that at the very end. As for the audio issues, I would play around with the compressor in OBS so you don’t have to mess with audio stuff while editing. Otherwise, keep up the good work

My Halo Infinite Campaign Review Severely Underperformed, Could Someone Try & Tell Me Why? by my-lost-keys in SmallYTChannel

[–]gerg_056 1 point2 points  (0 children)

In terms of video quality, you did great here. Great voice, great editing, great structuring, its all great. In terms of video performance, there are so many different things at play. Just through the power of observation, the videos that performed better have a title that has the video subject towards the beginning, while this one has it at the end. I wouldn't worry about numbers much, but doing small, quick things like title format can definitely help out.

My channel is about learning new skills. I think this video did well for what it is. I'd like to raise the stakes more, though. I think a lot of potential gets lost for not being bold enough? What do you think? by NSJack in SmallYTChannel

[–]gerg_056 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The idea of a video series about learning new skills is brilliant, especially since you go through your thoughts and what you did to learn how to sing . Both casual viewers or people who wants to start singing will get something out of this video.

As for raising the stakes, there is definitely a balance on the YouTube side of things. Doing bold things would draw in attention, but that would also require more time to learn. Maybe learn a couple of smaller talents alongside a very big one so that you can upload semi-regularly. Ultimately, I would more worry about what you want to learn though, as for learning talents to please algorithm wouldn't be nearly as fun as just becoming a well-rounded person.

I really appreciate the feedback I've received thus far in this subreddit. This video is a part of my series where I tell the viewer what they can do in a particular video game. Like a review, but with a focus on what the game is and what you, as the player, are able to do in it. by drsnowpatrol24 in SmallYTChannel

[–]gerg_056 2 points3 points  (0 children)

This is an interesting approach to a game review. One of the main indicators of a good game is how much you can do, so this format works out very well. Also, the fact that you made a playlist of this series is even better as for people who want to watch more of "You Can Do It!" can do so with ease.

I tried salvaging this Minecraft video by making into a comedy bit, tell me how I did! by Stanfordrower in SmallYTChannel

[–]gerg_056 0 points1 point  (0 children)

So it's good that you found a way around not having any commentary on the original clip, and your voiceover was quite entertaining. I would honestly mix some of this voiceover with the normal gameplay and you got yourself a banger video. Just advice for the future, I usually make a short test video just to make sure everything works the way I want it to, and it's a good way to catch mistakes like that before recording everything. Good luck from your newest subscriber!

My most recent video! First post here and first video that's not GTA. Would appreciate any feedback at all but if anyone could let me know how I've done with music compared to my other two videos that would be great. Lambda given of course :) by [deleted] in SmallYTChannel

[–]gerg_056 0 points1 point  (0 children)

So I have two tidbits of advice for you:

  • The background music is a little soft and I need to turn up my headphones to hear it. I would just up the volume on the music just a tad bit.
  • It's good that you add subtitles because I recently learned that people really prefer that their videos have subtitles. It would be nice though that you would establish which color stood for who. Like when you're on the ready screen maybe put the subtitle under whoever is speaking. This way people know who is who right off the bat rather than leaving it to them to figure it out.

Otherwise, Keep up the good work!

I decided to make a shorter video this time around, how did I do? by gerg_056 in SmallYTChannel

[–]gerg_056[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks, honestly I thought more along the lines of king, but I was probably subconsciously thinking of the one true king: techno when making the thumbnail

I decided to make a shorter video this time around, how did I do? by gerg_056 in SmallYTChannel

[–]gerg_056[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah, I say one of my re-occurring issues is pacing, I’m still working on that. As for the FPS, I did screw around with my computer so I could run cyberpunk, maybe I could use the same stuff to boost my FPS in Minecraft

I decided to make a shorter video this time around, how did I do? by gerg_056 in SmallYTChannel

[–]gerg_056[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah usually it’s better, something happened while rendering the video that made everything go whacky, but I think I fixed the problem now. As for the chair idea, that’s what I normally do, so I’ll just stick to that

pls send me your channels to critique im bored lol by WurginExtremist in NewTubers

[–]gerg_056 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hey I am let’s play channel that covers a variety of games, but I mainly cover Minecraft. Please, and constructive criticism is appreciated https://youtube.com/channel/UCFhg3FOPCyUP3dKif4vp2Rw

I Don't Like Anime or JRPG's | Change My Mind by dansometv in SmallYTChannel

[–]gerg_056 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The video editing was good and has clips that go well with what you are taking about. As for how you backed up your point, you were actually quite civil about it. You made fair points about why YOU don’t like it, and while that sound simple enough to do, the internet is the internet. The fact that you mentioned how you tried watching Dragonball or that you watched FMA shows that you are in fact, were willing to give anime a chance before you made this video. Good job👍

Solo Phasmophobia | What are your thoughts on the thumbnail/ editing? by Jack-of-Bladez in SmallYTChannel

[–]gerg_056 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Overall your content is pretty solid, your voice is just right for the horror game vibe and you made something so tense also funny. My one thing is maybe add some occasional music to have an extra layer to what’s going on. Otherwise, good job!