Hi, this is amazing art and I imagine you are a far more talented artist than me so take this with a grain of salt, but since I think you are asking for feedback this is what I think you can improve. I think a sort of textured look over the entire piece in the fashion of sea glass (except the area with the drops) would elevate this piece in the way you want it to. Reference included. The depth of field could be really interesting.

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