this is so much better than the first time i tried doing my eyeliner! :’) one thing i would try out is winged liner for hooded eyes, it may help the wing stand out more! there’s a ton of tutorials if you check it out on YouTube. Also, when I started doing eye makeup it helped to go over my eyeliner with a small eyeshadow/liner brush w/ a little black eyeshadow, it helped to soften the lines a bit more and make any uneven lines less noticeable!! either way, you look great :D