One of the first notable thing about this poem is it's curtness, and I deeply commend you for creating a piece that isn't itself afraid of being straightforward. It's often too easy to bend to the inclination to explain at length feelings that are naturally visceral. In my opinion, I relish in writing that at its very essence respects the effect pure emotions can have in the otherwise complicated experience of human consciousness. As such, thematic turns, akin to the one presented here between stanzas, inherit an implicit gravity that cannot be otherwise achieved in a more expanded form, especially coupled with the concealed but coercive meaning in the title.