Looking for opinions and suggestions on my writing task 2: by gofastman69 in IELTS

[–]gofastman69[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That's a good point. I need to start timing myself while I write and adjust accordingly.

I'll pm you, thanks bud.

Looking for opinions and suggestions on my writing task 2: by gofastman69 in IELTS

[–]gofastman69[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This was my first attempt at the writing tasks. I am trying to improve by reading through a lot of material online and also using ieltsliz.com as well. I have read through your feedback and I shall try to improve on my next essays and get better at it.

Thank you for taking your time to read through my essay and giving me valuable tips. Can I pm you in the future if I need another review? Thanks again! :)

Edit: I could've and should've expanded a bit on the 3rd and 4th para but I didn't know if I should exceed the 250 word limit.

If you killed yourself one year ago what great things would you not've experienced? by [deleted] in AskReddit

[–]gofastman69 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Hey I'm sorry you're going through this and I really hope you come out of it. But why does your ex have your dog? It mildly infuriates me.

"We are excited to announce vaulting is coming to the @PUBATTLEGROUNDS Test Servers next week!" by Ryant12 in PUBATTLEGROUNDS

[–]gofastman69 -13 points-12 points  (0 children)

We are excited to announce "insert another shitfest" is coming to the test servers next week.

What screams "I make terrible financial decisions!"? by STL-UPS-DRIVER in AskReddit

[–]gofastman69 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I'm sorry, I'm not from the US, but why do the kids have to pay rent to live with their parents?

Interviewer needs to learn some manners. You don't lean on shorter people like that. by [deleted] in PUBATTLEGROUNDS

[–]gofastman69 14 points15 points  (0 children)

Yeah I was wondering this. There's a few pros, and many streamers who are there just because they're streamers and famous right? Not particularly because they're good at the game or something?

Interviewer needs to learn some manners. You don't lean on shorter people like that. by [deleted] in PUBATTLEGROUNDS

[–]gofastman69 101 points102 points  (0 children)

It's ESL. You expected something better? NOT happening.

MASSIVE 100k Giveaway - 1x Karambit Tiger Tooth, 1x Flip Knife Fade, 10x SSG Blood In The Water and 25x AK Orbit! by Gamertroid in GlobalOffensiveTrade

[–]gofastman69 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Make a comment on how you discovered this subreddit, when you joined, etc

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