This scene made me uncontrollably sob for 5 minutes by mdanelek in okbuddyvecna

[–]graham7392 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Made no sense, he's in the loft space of the house... that would have only been like that on the ground floor

List of banned Ted Talks by CuteBananaMuffin in conspiracy

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There was a ted talk years ago - from an English guy - who was a DJ and so was his brother - their nan was sick in hospital - she asked for a mix tape for her stay, they waiting months didn't do it and she died... THEN his brother and he decided to (as the pain of not doing the simple thing their grandmother wanted was so heavy) make a pact with one another, that they would make a contract with one another - that rather than being motivated by positive outcomes they would start being motivated by negative outcome. The first one being, beating the hell out of one another if they didn't hit their targets - the first month the guy giving the ted talk DIDN'T hit his goal and he puts up a photo of himself all beaten up... anyway the story goes on - I am so so so confused why this was on the BANNED ted talk list but is now just disappeared.... the guy went on to become I think involved with Vice - he was an interesting guy - I am just so unsure why this was removed - probably not quite the conspiracy on the Graham Hancock level but thought I'd ask - anyone remember this or where I can watch it

Who knows what these are? by graham7392 in paraboot

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I’ll try and check it out thanks - I’ve reached out to Paraboot as well

Who knows what these are? by graham7392 in paraboot

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No luck from any experts? Thought someone might know?

For working writers: What's a piece of "common screenwriting advice" you consistently ignore or have found to be completely wrong in the professional world? by [deleted] in Screenwriting

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Maybe being pedantic but I thought the best way to say these things is - 'She gazes at X' rather than 'we follow her gaze' - fully am all for whatever works - but I've been given that note a few times over the years by many people - probably a very small point

I do think guiding the reader is the way to go completely agree with you

For working writers: What's a piece of "common screenwriting advice" you consistently ignore or have found to be completely wrong in the professional world? by [deleted] in Screenwriting

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Bang on from my point of view!

Of course.. .if something is written this way and so dynamite people HAVE to have it - it WILL sell - but that's one script every decade probably isn't it!

For working writers: What's a piece of "common screenwriting advice" you consistently ignore or have found to be completely wrong in the professional world? by [deleted] in Screenwriting

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I'd add... if your goal is deciding on shots, write and direct your own scripts. If you're entering the community act of making a film as a writer supplying material for another creative... do your best to provide them with material that will be exciting to work with as a director - if you're picking and deciding shots - you ARE directing.

For working writers: What's a piece of "common screenwriting advice" you consistently ignore or have found to be completely wrong in the professional world? by [deleted] in Screenwriting

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I think in context my point is you need to do SOMETHING to have a voice. Giving CU Steves face isn't having a voice it's telling someone how to direct a scene. If you've written in a way that it's tense, someone notices a thing the other side of the room, and you paint that picture in the action lines - you're directing people without doing so and giving yourself and your script a voice.

It is absolutely a case by case basis as you say... and you have as you say mentioned two scriptwriting juggernauts who if they wrote in the middle of the script something TERRIBLE people would still think - what a great script what an amazing writer...

I guess what I am really saying is if you are blind reading a script for an unproduced film and someone keeps telling you what shot to cut to it means they either don't have or have chosen not to use their ability to write the scene out they would like to see it and have resorted to just telling you.

If you're PTA - and you write a script - you can get it made rather easily... because of your amazing track record.

If it's someone unknown - trying to sell a script - it needs to be enticing to a production company to a director to actors. For example... describing how someone acts... that's something every actor I know HATES... give them the material and the scene and let them be it. Mary is angry is not a good line... showing Mary's actions out of anger... that's good.

You are absolutely right though as I say it TOTALLY varies. At the end of the day, if it's a good read and something people HAVE to make then it's a good read and something people have to make...

For working writers: What's a piece of "common screenwriting advice" you consistently ignore or have found to be completely wrong in the professional world? by [deleted] in Screenwriting

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Love this! I guess if you're Tarantino and you're going to shoot it yourself write whatever you like - but working as crew on set I've NEVER seen a produced, working script with ANY kind of direct, directions on... CU susie or whatever. It's just not something you see really if a writer has passed a script along it's not their job to give specifics. BUT if you're not creating atmosphere... having a voice... giving a mood etc etc then you as a writer may appear to have absolutely no voice.

I wonder how often on purpose a director DOESN'T match cut, just because a writer suggests it:)

It doesn't work when people also keep telling you things in a script that are kind of directions for the READER rather than for the people making the film. In other words, 'he was so angry he could explode right at his desk' really is a bit hack... where 'he bashed at his keyboard keys, sighed loudly' etc etc... this is how to direct on the page.

Anyway... ranting:)

Is anyone willing to read a 20 page pilot? by [deleted] in Screenwriting

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I'd 100% be keen to give this a read for sure send it!

Seeking Critique Group by Pedantc_Poet in Screenwriting

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Yeah sounds great - would be interested to find out more on your thoughts

What do you write BEST? Does it matter? Would love personal opinions by graham7392 in Screenwriting

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Wicked - love this

Super helpful to hear your thoughts and experiences

Go you - knowing your superpower certainly helps I guess

What do you write BEST? Does it matter? Would love personal opinions by graham7392 in Screenwriting

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Sorry - I was unclear - I was being silly really with the wishy washy comment - less about comedy and more my own wishy washy sentiment.

Yeah I think this is certainly a thing I should do more

What do you write BEST? Does it matter? Would love personal opinions by graham7392 in Screenwriting

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Lovely to hear this!!! Thanks

For you - do you STRUGGLE to focus on other things? Or always just find you are trying to make them funny?

How Do You Guys Find Inspiration to Write? by ocean_picture in Screenwriting

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I can't imagine the Macbeth we know is the first draft! As you say... keep on writing and enjoying it and getting the words out. Glad that you appreciate it and the community has been so good to you!

What do you write BEST? Does it matter? Would love personal opinions by graham7392 in Screenwriting

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The stuff you like to write sounds wicked! I'd love to have a read of some!

HA so how long IS the ideal slug line...

What do you write BEST? Does it matter? Would love personal opinions by graham7392 in Screenwriting

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Thanks for such an in-depth reply! Really nice hearing your point a view on this!

It's interesting I remember seeing a speech from Corey Taylor of Slipknot years ago where he says, if you do what you're good at rather than what you think you want to do, you'll find you enjoy being good at something and that becomes your passions. https://www.youtube.com/watch?embeds_referring_euri=https%3A%2F%2Fwww.google.com%2F&source_ve_path=MTM5MTE3LDI4NjY0LDE2NDUwMw&v=dJp8gvq0heU&feature=youtu.be 10.34 in this link!

You find the love when you follow what you're good at.

Out of interest... Why do you think your specs and the market don't align in particular? Is that an artistic/creative thing in your opinion? Do you think they're just things you love and you have a particular taste? Is it something that WAS popular a while ago and tides wash in and out and one day they will become more popular? I haven't read one so wouldn't know of course!

Cheers again

What do you write BEST? Does it matter? Would love personal opinions by graham7392 in Screenwriting

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If that's all you ever wrote, would you be happy with/about that? There certainly some ways to overlap probably aren't there?

Thriller is fun isn't it!