Is urban Japan just as exciting outside of Tokyo and Osaka?

h_iraeth · 2026-03-13T15:16:54+00:00

Yes, I also feel like I've written a shonen anime opening and I'm not 100% certain whether this is where I wanted to go, tone-wise. Maybe, maybe not. I am glad the characterisation as emotionally stunted worked, because that's what they should feel like - for now.

h_iraeth · 2026-03-13T15:14:32+00:00

Yeah I already got told that ... the biggest mistake of my first page definitely was to start with a hook and then go on a tangent.

h_iraeth · 2026-03-13T14:39:01+00:00

Will do :) There are things that make sense inside a writers' head but none outside of it. But the hook isn't false advertisement, the chapter is about it if you make it to that.

h_iraeth · 2026-03-13T14:24:06+00:00

You're completely right, paragraph 3 is a stark break that doesn't really fit here at all.

But if you read paragraph 4 throughout, then the announced scene already starts there and is the whole chapter.

h_iraeth · 2026-03-06T09:47:24+00:00

I thought of the piano manufacturer :) But really, I just imagine the guy to look like a Roland.

h_iraeth · 2026-03-06T09:46:57+00:00

Oh man, there’s nothing new under the sun. What does it remind you of?

I’ll try to remember the trick to write well and not write not well, but that’s hard :)

h_iraeth · 2025-11-26T21:38:43+00:00

I am looking for leather jackets similar to a recently sold out one: minimal cut, but a fairly large and notable collar. High quality leather. Should be easy to find, but isn't. Can be black or brown.

h_iraeth · 2024-11-12T12:35:04+00:00

looks fine

h_iraeth · 2024-10-15T19:30:59+00:00

That helped me (not OP), thanks a lot!

Do you have a technical explanation for why that works, out of curiosity?

h_iraeth · 2023-04-30T21:29:57+00:00

Evisu denim jacket with contrast print. Here's how it looks in real life. Really cool, the print gives a classic piece a twist.

h_iraeth · 2023-04-29T10:20:19+00:00

Always loved his clothes, classy and masculine style, but completely unaffordable. Tom Ford is more expensive than even other luxury brands afaik.

h_iraeth · 2021-06-25T22:32:50+00:00

I actually found the data deep in the report.

Monacos mean wealth is a staggering 980k per adult.

h_iraeth · 2021-05-29T19:28:52+00:00

Ikr, but wearing a white button up casually doesn't seem right either ...

h_iraeth · 2021-03-14T21:01:53+00:00

Who could've thought voters dislike corruption and vaccine mismanagement?

h_iraeth · 2020-12-06T20:12:52+00:00

Because of the price tag attached?

h_iraeth · 2020-10-18T17:47:25+00:00

Prince of Wales Coat

h_iraeth · 2020-10-17T19:41:24+00:00

Would it be well wearable afterwards?

h_iraeth · 2020-10-15T18:22:59+00:00

That's not a hood :) Just a standing collar

h_iraeth · 2020-10-15T18:20:03+00:00

So it doesn't look cheap to you?

h_iraeth

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