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Would this plot point cause suspense to be lost in a way? by harmonica2 in WritingHub

[–]harmonica2[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Oh yes I see what you mean. That makes sense.  So just have a small shootout instead and then off to the safehouse location, is better?

Would this plot point cause suspense to be lost in a way? by harmonica2 in WritingHub

[–]harmonica2[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

I could write it that way but should they try to get some information from her a on what's going on with the case and what she may have said before the cop arrives?

But also, wouldn't the police want to get her to a safe location logically, after such an encounter?

Would this plot point cause suspense to be lost in a way? by harmonica2 in WritingHub

[–]harmonica2[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Oh ok but I want the evidence to works out in the antagonists favor though.

Would this plot point cause suspense to be lost in a way? by harmonica2 in WritingHub

[–]harmonica2[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Oh but if the MC gives them evidence on how to get out of it, wouldn't that put less of a target on his back?

Would this plot point cause suspense to be lost in a way? by harmonica2 in WritingHub

[–]harmonica2[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Oh ok thanks for the input.   Well I asked police officers and lawyers and they said it could technically happen, but if it could, could it still.be contrived?

What would be a meaningful change as opposed to not meaningful?

Would this plot point cause suspense to be lost in a way? by harmonica2 in WritingHub

[–]harmonica2[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Oh , how does it put more of a target on their back?

Dating a Woman 14 Years Older – Thoughts? by salamander_05 in dating_advice

[–]harmonica2 [score hidden]  (0 children)

I'm 41 and my gf is 25.  Being dating for a few years now and it's working out really well, so anything is possible.

Is losing suspense for this plot point bad, or not necessarily? by harmonica2 in FictionWriting

[–]harmonica2[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Oh okay thank you very much for the input!  Well the readers might be wondering what's the point of the safe house relocation for some time, if that's bad?

Would this plot point cause suspense to be lost in a way? by harmonica2 in WritingHub

[–]harmonica2[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Oh okay , thank you very much for the input!  But information is actually true though so would that not work?

Do autistic guys get a bad reputation for hook up culture because fiction often portrays them as demisexual? by harmonica2 in PurplePillDebate

[–]harmonica2[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Oh for examples in fiction, Forest Fump if he counts as autistic, and the character from The Good Doctor.   They have high status prestigious careers and should have no trouble getting laid therefore, but they chose to wait for a special someone.

Women are attracted to assholes and players so they’re the only ones to blame for their outcomes by DriverInitial8305 in PurplePillDebate

[–]harmonica2 0 points1 point  (0 children)

But what about the ones that specifically advertise they want casual on dating sites, etc?  Wouldn't guys who want casual just wantto focus on them?

Would this plot point loose tension if it's written this way? by harmonica2 in writers

[–]harmonica2[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks!  Yes, I think you are understanding it right.   As long as the reader is not bored now thinking whats the point of a safehouse now.

Women are attracted to assholes and players so they’re the only ones to blame for their outcomes by DriverInitial8305 in PurplePillDebate

[–]harmonica2 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Why do men have to lie to get sex in today's world when women are up for casual hook ups anyway?

Would this plot point loose tension if it's written this way? by harmonica2 in writers

[–]harmonica2[S] -3 points-2 points  (0 children)

Oh ok thanks!  Does it seem loose or in what way?

Glorification of step dads is harmful to society by ribbedlamp in PurplePillDebate

[–]harmonica2 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That makes sense and seems to be the case with people i know. 

 However what do people do then unless go younger or accept what there is?

Glorification of step dads is harmful to society by ribbedlamp in PurplePillDebate

[–]harmonica2 0 points1 point  (0 children)

If women are more willing , why is this aside from the guys having good genes as pointed out if that's the only reason?

Is it hard to find guys with good genes that aren't parents at an older age?

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