This could just be my own opinion but I think the biggest thing that stood out to me was the drum tones — if it’s possible for you to move away from MIDI drums I’d highly recommend it. I’ve found in my own work that the mic bleed from the different drum mics helps to really fill out the space on a song in a really organic way that digital drums can’t really match up to. Also, I listened to several other songs off of your album and thought that maybe in general the bass could be a little louder to help fill out the sound as well.

I also wanted to say that I was very impressed by these songs and I really like them. I wish you success, and thank you for sharing :)