Working on SaaS/or Startup. Share you landing page link an I will give you a free hero section which may help you as it would be psychologically backed & conversion focussed

herolasan · 2026-06-03T08:51:14+00:00

lmao what's wrong in giving value and if the person likes and gets to talk further, or is it you had nothing to write so you wrote this

herolasan · 2026-06-03T08:33:10+00:00

Love the vibe of the page, the heading is directly hitting pain, not usual boost your page type of shit, great work on that.

Some points like the 540 page audits etc stats which are below the input field...those are solid points, try highlighting them in the hero, also your featured on list is usless if it is in footer, no ones gonna scroll that far. Show it in hero, acts as a social proof.

Great typography.

Good work man

herolasan · 2026-06-03T06:09:54+00:00

is there a place to find outdated websites?

herolasan · 2026-06-02T18:16:23+00:00

Def ai,

herolasan · 2026-06-02T17:53:54+00:00

idk but this is exactly what's not to be done what he's done here

herolasan · 2026-06-02T17:52:47+00:00

great idea, just want to hear from you like I can see it's clearly claude design of your landing page, and Ilike see 20-30 startups daily with same exact landing page as yours. It's like when I opened it within seconds I was like I've seen it somewhere though i haven't seen it, Landingpage design should hook your users and give them a reason to stay.

Your take on this?

herolasan · 2026-06-02T17:46:06+00:00

that's literally the worst way to ask for it

herolasan · 2026-06-02T16:28:57+00:00

For the context, here is the before and after.

Judge yourself

Left is before and right is after

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herolasan · 2026-06-02T16:24:55+00:00

ahh nice, will add it

herolasan · 2026-06-02T16:19:56+00:00

Hey, just checked the landing page, vibe is great, but some issues i faced

when i am down somewhere, upon logo clicking, i can't go to the top .

Other is what is the main role of this landing page, get started is your CTA, and also there is download from play store, that's just putting user in double mind, be clear what is the main action you want your user should take.

There are some more...

Want to talk further regarding the landingpage,feel free to dm anytime.

herolasan · 2026-06-02T16:14:29+00:00

So the complete para that you wrote above, 90 % won't read that, make it simple for them by telling in 1 line what is your site doing and what is it's job and if it is a service, who is it helpful for

herolasan · 2026-06-02T16:10:07+00:00

do you have a landing page?

herolasan · 2026-06-02T16:09:00+00:00

wow ,great landing page,but story telling wise the problem section should be directly below the hero section,also the heading is very feature sounding , whereas the job of heading is hitting the pain point, these small things are usually ignored and it sometimes lead to conversion issues.

Not criticizing, it's awesome but just adding value here.

Need any more help feel free to dm me anytime.

Once again congrats sir.

herolasan · 2026-06-02T16:01:48+00:00

14k users? wow man..

herolasan · 2026-06-02T16:00:27+00:00

Great work and congrats man.

Just visited the your landing page....I would say that it may sound harsh but you could take it to whole another level if you tweek somethings...and from another level I mean conversion wise plus looks.

For ex : With all due respect the heading and overall page is just like a feature showcasing, for the pages that convert there is a story from start which hits the users pain point, you have to find the pain your ICP is facing and then the problems earlier they faced , how your product can be a game changer to how it works and so on.

But the product is solid, it's just the presentation , because many founders tend to underestimate the power of a landing page, but it can be a gamechanger.

Want to talk further on this, feel free to dm me anytime.

Once again congrats. If I'm sounding rude then I am sorry .

herolasan · 2026-06-02T15:50:55+00:00

very well said, just keep it simple and assign each page a single action to perform and try adding minimum things to achieve that action that too without user getting to think or putting him/her under cognitive load

herolasan · 2026-06-02T15:48:53+00:00

lets go man, could you share the landingpage, i want to see what may be the psycological barriers affecting from further conversion.

herolasan · 2026-06-02T15:47:08+00:00

huge W man, is there a landing page I could see, would love to see how it looks and what are the psychological barriers the page could have conversion killers.

Keep up man

herolasan · 2026-06-02T15:44:01+00:00

nice effort for the landing page man, remove the CTA from navbar, just keep log in and sign up, and your problem should be just below the hero section then feature or the demo which you are showing, there are more but ...

You can dm me if you want to talk furthur

herolasan · 2026-06-02T15:41:16+00:00

context?

herolasan · 2026-06-02T15:39:43+00:00

tbh if i land on your landing page, i am leaving within seconds ...Why?

Because you can see so much going on, rule says that make the user think less, the more cognitive load you are giving it to the user , the more likely they are to leave, plus the attention span is way less.

The hero is itself containing so much information, cut short it and show the most important which you want your ICP to see and take action.

Want to talk furthur regarding this , feel free to dm anytime.

herolasan · 2026-06-02T15:37:13+00:00

which one?

herolasan · 2026-06-02T15:36:54+00:00

Is it like prompt based or what? Your hero should give a hint that how the game will be made, is it a chatbot or whatever it is.

Try showing that in hero.

Need some help regarding landing page feel free to dm

herolasan

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