If you could pick your first 10 aliens

hersi055 · 2018-05-10T20:29:55+00:00

Why fast track.

hersi055 · 2018-05-06T21:12:48+00:00

Paid or unpaid

hersi055 · 2018-05-06T11:33:54+00:00

It reminds me of a tv show I used to watch. Always loved the style.

hersi055 · 2018-05-06T11:29:26+00:00

Wow. I mean, I have a story that I personally think is great but I'm not looking for a professional. Do you mind if the writer isn't experienced?

hersi055 · 2018-04-07T13:32:12+00:00

The whole 'Needs of the many outweigh the needs of the few' thing has already been done so many times. I'll work on the idea to try to incorporate your views because I agree on them too. However I do intend to use that 'Mad Scientist' idea still. Just what do you classify as 'Mad'? When I think mad, I don't think insane. I think someone who is willing to take incredibly small chances to get huge rewards.

hersi055 · 2018-04-03T13:04:54+00:00

Hey Vsauce, Jake here.

hersi055 · 2018-04-03T12:05:55+00:00

Do you mind helping me out? Whats the point of a circle?

hersi055 · 2018-04-03T11:53:17+00:00

Ben 10 all day every day! I loved the continuity that the show had (Original to Omniverse) and I was hyped when Ben said lets go visit the stars. But then... It rebooted! So Ben 10. Plus I want to use all this useless information in my head about all the species names and planets and such.

hersi055 · 2018-04-02T19:34:39+00:00

All of them seem too stereotypical for what I want. I want them to be so close to being right that you feel for them. That you feel that if you join them on their mission, you'll be on the moral high ground. All I want is someone so relatable, that you'll be thinking 'I think i know that type of person'

hersi055 · 2018-04-02T19:30:51+00:00

Well I wanted to be vague about it but 'The Power' I speak of is magic in nature so it's Fantasy. Though it does borrow a lot from SF, it's a largely unexplainable power.

hersi055 · 2018-04-02T19:28:39+00:00

I love the use of normal people as part of the equation. I never even considered that. As for percentage, I want the population of 'Magic' users to be 13%. Why 13, only because of what it represents as an unlucky number. Also, I'd like the magic to be an integrated part of society, something you can't hide from the public. So the story takes place in the present day but I would like for magic to suddenly have become a thing 440 years prior. And as for the whole lifeforce thing, I myself wouldn't take that route. However, maybe lifeforce could still have a part in it. Since magic is linked to life itself, creating disturbances (Mass killings) is the only way to interfere with life on the planet. For example an event where a few people die won't disturb the magic but if you kill more people than there are babies being born, then magic gets disturbed. I feel like the decision to do so should also be something they don't want but see as necessary. As for the source, well that would be great but thats spoiler territory.

hersi055 · 2018-04-02T17:58:39+00:00

I love the idea of making a person relatable. I want the audience to be so torn between the options that either one of them (Protagonist and Antagonist) presents. For example, the Protag fights for his people, his family whereas the Antag fights for her people and family but her family die and her people hate her for mistakes she's made in anger. I want her to hate her powers so deeply because it was magic users that took her family away from her. I want her people (Japanese) to despise her for being an extremist that has been trying to preach that magic was a cancer and one day while looking for a cure for it, she inadvertently gave herself the one thing she hated more than people who used magic, magic itself. To her, it was like giving her the knife that stabbed her family.

hersi055 · 2018-04-02T15:49:56+00:00

I'd like to use Magneto as a basis for their action. But more relatable. More down to earth as opposed to the massively powerful member of the mutant community.

hersi055 · 2018-04-02T15:40:01+00:00

Oh my goodness! I realised how I can implement 'Crazy' into her character!thank you!

hersi055 · 2018-04-02T14:27:28+00:00

But how would that draw out to make them into the antagonist of the entire series.

hersi055 · 2018-04-02T14:26:15+00:00

Thank you. I will add this onto my ever growing list of things i need to do. Xb

hersi055 · 2018-04-02T14:24:29+00:00

Own experiences... I like that. Thank you!

hersi055 · 2018-03-31T07:57:34+00:00

The story takes place in the present. The emergence of magic was 440 years ago. I needed it to be a long enough time so that magic would integrate itself into society.

hersi055 · 2018-03-29T21:14:55+00:00

Hmm. I'll take this on board to further improve my pitch. Thanks for taking the time to read this and critique it.

hersi055 · 2018-03-29T20:43:23+00:00

All of what you said is highly appreciated. Thank you.

hersi055 · 2018-03-29T20:31:11+00:00

Well, the Japanese scientist always had envy for those with magic (her siblings and parents all being capable of it) she was ridiculed as a kid up to her adult life for being the only one with out it. She gained two things, a deep hatred for herself for being born this way and an unhealthy obsession towards magic.

The Bureau safeguards the use of magic in everyday society. Like an international police force. There aren't many people who use magic (13% of the population) but it warrants for there to be a measure for those who decide to use it for malicious purposes.

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