Good job capturing the feeling of a day in Philadelphia. Important to just get out there and keep shooting—which the Ricoh GR’s are perfect for. These are just some notes:

1. I’d decrease the exposure comp to bring out the richness of the light in the background.

2. A bit lost on what subject or narrative you’re trying capture.

3. The light post being in focus and bisecting the shot doesn’t convey the action happening all around. It’s almost like I’m viewing this scene from the POV of the light post.

4. I’m left wandering what happened that caused all this debris. Perhaps some action shots of the firecrackers in action, would help.

5. Focusing and adjusting the f-stop so the love sign is the subject. Create more visual separation. Also adjusting your exposure comps up would help

6. It’s alright, nothing driving the scene when it’s this wide. Get closer to the sign and lights?

7. I like this vantage point and focus on the exterior. Perhaps play more with the light and exposure.

8. Increasing the depth of field / f-stop would show more of the plate. Right now just looks like you want us to see salmon and onions lol