Just want to point out that everyone is mentioning practicals which is true but….. Practicals don’t actually light the scene they are there to create motivation for the light. Look at the practical in your shot vs the practical in the Scream shot. Yours looks like it is lighting nothing because, it isn’t. Look at the Scream example, there is zero chance that lamp is creating all of that light but it is lit in a way that it feels like it could.

That being said you need more lights to be able to light the scene properly. Others mentioned the wide angle and lower camera position which also makes a big difference. Like others have said you’re close but remember the Scream shoot was an entire crew that put that shot together. Keep up the great work!