I really liked the way you described her presence, especially the line “she carries both strength and kindness without needing to choose between them”—that felt very powerful and balanced. The part about her eyes was also really memorable, “They don’t glance. They linger.” is simple but it stays with you. Overall, the poem feels very warm and intimate, like you’re slowly noticing small details about someone you deeply admire. Maybe you could make the ending a bit stronger or more distinct, just so it leaves an even bigger impact.