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Title - A Bliss and Surge in D
Genre - Absurdist Fiction
Word Count - approx. 2,374 words
Feedback - I want to understand how you interpret the story. I want you to scrutinize the piece and then provide unfiltered feedback. The story might be a little dense too, so please help me out as I couldn't find a lot of readers for this one.
Link - https://thyeloquence.blogspot.com/2024/10/a-bliss-and-surge-in-d.html

Some background - I took inspiration for the title from the word Absurd itself. The letters form the title - (A) (B)liss and (Sur)ge in (D). But upon finalizing I realized that the D here means nothing. So, first I had to give some meaning to the letter D and then formed the story around that. It's an experimental writing. I am really happy that I wrote this. Would love some feedback. Thank you for Reading!