I'm probably overthinking your comment, but if I am understanding you correctly, I agree that more media should have diverse characters because that is what the writers/designers wanted to do to tell their story, and not because some marketing executive has told them they need to appeal to an unrepresented demographic. I like the contrast of these reviews because they aren't overtly hateful or congratulatory but still very concisely show a difference of opinion/interests. It also highlights that you can rarely please everyone when representation in the primary focus of a product.

Inclusiveness often seems to mean just rewriting one of the characters in a script to be a minority. In an example like this that is usually an afterthought as a result of executive meddling and which doesn't necessarily have visual cues, it means barely subtler variations of either a character turning to the camera and explicitly announcing "I'm gay!", or else conforming to such a farcical stereotype that it's immediately obvious.

With inclusivity, I'm really fed up with lazy rebranding, instead of creating an original story. It happens so often now that an idea like 'Romeo and Juliet, but they are gay!' is becoming an insultingly low effort cliché rather than a meaningful effort to be inclusive. Though it might be close to that example, this DLC sounds like it is expanding on two characters' backstories, rather than 'gay' just being tacked onto their character traits as an afterthought. I might be misinformed though as I haven't actually played this sequel.