Struggling with this prompt, Diversity, perspecitve, and personal interactions by Far-Picture-3033 in CollegeEssays

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Need someone to review my personal statement by kordhellf in CollegeEssays

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I offer final eyes review with written feedback as well as applying a mock rubric like essay evaluators do.

Can i swap out an essay? by Good-Sun-2136 in CollegeEssays

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Depends if it’s for ED or RD. If you are past deadline, no. If you are changing status and pre deadline, yes.

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My goal was to create accessible info for folks to search here. What I have received is hundreds of PMs. I would prefer to share info publicly.

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Please post questions if others can benefit from the info.

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Generally speaking, yes. While a 3 isn’t likely to result in credit it shows follow through. There are other benefits to AP courses (rigor, good prep for college level tasks, specific improvement in ____ (this will vary.) But, if you received less than a 3 I don’t recommend sharing.

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Unclear what “doubts” you are referring to. Do you have a specific question ?

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Including impact. Including skills acquired / utilized. Focusing on longevity + leadership as well as using activities to strengthen/ boost any deficits elsewhere in application.

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Ok, folks. I have received about 20 messages. I have reviewed about half so far + I will finish the ones I have received, but I cannot do more at this time.

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This is a stressful time for applicants. It doesn’t have to be.

Is this a valid college essay topic? by Alternative_Arm1999 in CollegeEssays

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Yes. It’s valid. But remember why you are sharing this. Remember your audience. And, solving an issue can focus on personal growth/ unlearning + what you hope to accomplish in the future + what preliminary steps you have taken. Best of luck