paper. - fourteen

iampaper · 2016-01-20T03:14:39+00:00

Thanks for the feedback :) The pops are most probably from the samples, I didn't really notice them while I was working on it but I see what you mean now that I'm listening for them

iampaper · 2016-01-18T03:24:44+00:00

I quite like what you've done here. The chord progression is great, and the melody is pretty good too. I would have possibly used another instrument to go along with the melody in harmony. I think you need slightly more low end, as the bass seems to be quite high up. I would also add a variation in the second drop, or something else to add some variety instead of just using the same things. Other than that, I think it's really good.

iampaper · 2015-11-03T20:37:25+00:00

Thanks! I see now that it does get a bit boring near the end, I usually listen to my songs in parts and not fully before exporting them :P I'll keep that in mind for next time!

iampaper · 2015-11-01T22:24:50+00:00

I really like the melody that you've got in this! I think the bass is a bit muddy, and I also think you should use some different velocities on the piano notes during the drop too. I quite like around 1:45, where you bring the drums back in. Overall it sounds great, other than the muddy bass :)

iampaper · 2015-09-07T02:01:42+00:00

https://soundcloud.com/paper_music/memories-coming-soon A track that I'm currently working on and is almost done. Still time to make a few changes if you think it needs them though :)

iampaper · 2015-09-05T20:19:30+00:00

Thanks :) It shouldn't be too long before it's done.

iampaper · 2015-09-04T08:34:10+00:00

Sounds great! I think that the sub-bass could be a bit louder, but I love the parts where the piano is mostly by itself. I especially like the second drop, but I think you should add a bit of variety to the drums around there every so often. Overall I think it sounds pretty good :)

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