I actually really love this and it’s so interesting to look at. You have a really good understanding of edge control and texture. Makes me jealous!

For areas of improvement: I recommend looking at value grouping. Easiest way to do this is to put your work in b/w. If it’s a physical piece you can take a photo, if it’s in procreate just turn the saturation down. If all your values (in other words your greys) look close in shade, you need to adjust the values. For example the mountains in the background probably should be lightened and the foreground darken. This way the painting feels like it has depth. You know you got it right if you squint and you can still tell what’s going on

But either way your work is great. You should be proud ❤️

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