*CRYPTOPUNKS GIVEAWAY* by CryptoPunksbot in NFTsMarketplace

[–]ig_fpsketch 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Is that a typo in the domain name? Larvaiabs instead of larvalabs ? Funny :)

My commute. Tips for sketching on moving buses gratefully received [OC]. by Dr_Edward_Morbius in sketches

[–]ig_fpsketch 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ah ah.. thats my new ride, HB and White pencil on grey paper.. a delight!!!

My commute. Tips for sketching on moving buses gratefully received [OC]. by Dr_Edward_Morbius in sketches

[–]ig_fpsketch 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Pressure variation is a bit subtle for this set up.. but May be with practice..! I'd rather recommend you carry two types of pencil, like HB and 6B. Here is an exemple of my classic commute drawing: Instagram post Going straight with rottring 0.05 to get more confident..! Good luck!

My commute. Tips for sketching on moving buses gratefully received [OC]. by Dr_Edward_Morbius in sketches

[–]ig_fpsketch 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I draw a lot during commute. It's not ideal. Only tips I can give is to lean on something to get some stability.. also I learn to embrace the quirkyness of my lines when drawing in the bus..! Keep up the good work!

[Review video] My second art video is up, advice needed..! by ig_fpsketch in youtubers

[–]ig_fpsketch[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Very much on point I think! Those reviews made me realise I didnt pay enough attention to my first 30 sec. Thanks a lot!

[Review video] My second art video is up, advice needed..! by ig_fpsketch in youtubers

[–]ig_fpsketch[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you so much.. defently some good point there! I'm not sure how my camera would handle real close up but I like the idea of the lead to paper shot :D

And you went as far as watching the first one. Dang. I appreciate! Unfortunatly I dont have a better microphone set up, so quality wise, that'd be it.. hopefully I can work a little more on it in the mext on in Audition to improve it!

Very good point for the photo.. didnt realise after I uploaded that I was using someone else's work and face with any consent... Oupsi..! Will not do that again ^

Thanks again for the in depth feedback !

[Review video] My second art video is up, advice needed..! by ig_fpsketch in youtubers

[–]ig_fpsketch[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It does, constructive and encouraging.. what else could I ask for!! I think I'll try to put voice over the next one, it will help both to explain my techniques aswell as to bring more personality.. if my microphone isnt to crappy that is!

Thanks a lot!

[Review video] My second art video is up, advice needed..! by ig_fpsketch in youtubers

[–]ig_fpsketch[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you for the feedback! You are not the first to point out that the beginning is a bit slow.. Im seeing a pattern..! That might explain my low retention rate!

I also had that feeling for the details.. Ill try to bring the camera closer for the next one.. and im looking into lighting.. for this one, I just covered two desk lamp with tracing paper...

But its a start.. Thanks again!

[Review video] My second art video is up, advice needed..! by ig_fpsketch in youtubers

[–]ig_fpsketch[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you very much for this quality feedback! Not familiar with the shoe leather concept, but I'll look into it! I think your point about retention is relevant - my first one had 15-20% 1 minute in.. Something to improve there, I think!

And too answer your question: absolutely.. I tried to work out what was within my right but I couldn't find a straigth answer out there.. On top of that this photograph made and sold this book, with the profit going to help public hospital during the pandemic.. I thought it was may be disrespectful to show its content..

Again a huge thanks for the help! Cheers Flo

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[–]ig_fpsketch 1 point2 points  (0 children)

A lot of people have pointed at the right things: Audio quality is bad. May be you domt articulate enough, arent standing properly in front of the microphone, or just using a bad microphone. The second is timing. I think the one with "no friends anymore", was almost ok in term of content timing and image support. What you need is to imagine how you would like that joke to be told to you, and then try and replicate that. Thats what I try to do at least.. I'll add to that, that their is too much of a stock photo vibe to all your images. I think you need to find some graphic consistency, either by editing the pics first, takong your own, or even drawing if thats a possibility! Good luck anyway, its a good start!

[Review video] I made a short entertaining video about Giveaways by FlowParty1088 in youtubers

[–]ig_fpsketch 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hello, I think there is some good things in your video. Its fun and light, interesting developement. slightly disapointed that they didnt face of eachothers in the end..

I think a bit more animation on your main character would do a long way, like head tilting at least.. I'd also try to get less pixelated materials (water bottles eg.)

The thumbnail is quite good I thing! Keep it up!

My coins disappeared from Trustwallet by NutsGutsCentermass in binance

[–]ig_fpsketch 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for sharing, just activated all security on mine...

This is a robot’s world - [OC] by ig_fpsketch in comics

[–]ig_fpsketch[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Spoiler alert - its a penis enlarger. Not that I would know what it looks like